Along the old railway

Redwolf · February 11, 2011, 01:05:50 PM

tried out a new model of rosebay, then the track then everything else, this is the third render of the scene

Kevin F · February 11, 2011, 02:48:04 PM

Nice start. The purple rosebay willow herb is a bit too bright and "clean" for my taste. It looks almost false. Try "dirtying" it up a bit.
Good concept though and nice perspective POV.

Henry Blewer · February 11, 2011, 03:04:34 PM

I would try breaking up the rosebay into spaced apart clumps of ten to fifteen plants. I like this. The railway looks really good. Some rust along the sides of the rails may help its 'seldom used' feeling.

Zairyn Arsyn · February 11, 2011, 03:33:00 PM

i like this, looks promising.
i once tried something like this about a couple years ago with a older version of TG2 but got too frustrated with it.

this is a good start, i agree with njeneb's suggestions.

Zairyn Arsyn · February 11, 2011, 08:59:20 PM

oops.. wrong thread...

somebody delete this post.

here are some renders of the lightning flower i was talking about-

http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=144#/d1qdarz

http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/art/untitled-wooded-landscape-104152344

Redwolf · February 12, 2011, 05:16:46 AM

yeah i agree they look plastic and clumping them should work better, perhaps another pov of this later

Redwolf · February 12, 2011, 08:55:49 AM

sorted it out the line will be viewed from the centre mostly to the right and disappear into trees on the horizon, I have changed the colour of the flowers to a dirty pink and the DO look better on a small render

Will fully render it tonight, bedtime

choronr · February 12, 2011, 04:35:25 PM

Very nice. I would suggest you make the color of some of the grasses around the track rail a dry color. Also, you might thin out the spacing of the pink flowers while maybe having some multiple size variations.

Redwolf · February 13, 2011, 04:31:14 AM

i could have made some dried grass patches, never thought of that, ill get it right in the end!!
Dirtied the flowers up and they do look better

Naoo · February 13, 2011, 05:45:20 AM

Hi

Colors are much better now.
A few Cirrus Clouds would be nice.

ciao
Naoo

DVA99 · February 13, 2011, 06:42:45 AM

Good one Redwolf!

Like the colours and the composition.

Like you said, maybe add some dry grass here and there to break up the green, but why bother. It looks good.

Henry Blewer · February 13, 2011, 08:11:56 AM

Good work. I like this POV better also.

dandelO · February 13, 2011, 09:47:32 AM

That looks great! I like it in this pov too. I also like how you have sunk the sleepers into the ground so that some stones appear on top of them, cool.

Redwolf · February 13, 2011, 04:06:08 PM

thanks for comments guys, with your tips i was able to change this around to the better

All models created by terrade

Naoo · February 13, 2011, 04:55:26 PM

Hi

The new POV is better and the tower is okay,
but sorry, for the realism the clouds now are to strange.

ciao
Naoo