Dinner For Two - Afternoon

Started by masonspappy, February 18, 2011, 09:42:38 PM

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masonspappy

Any crits and comments are welcome.  I'm working through a series of images and striving for photorealism.

otakar

High quality, indeed. A few crits would be the spacing of the trees (too close) and the regularity of the ground layer (some clear soil spots, perhaps?).

Dune

The first thing I'd do is put on soft shadows, and perhaps a little fill light from NW (relatively). The light is a bit harsh. And will they be sitting there in this leafless season?

Redwolf

i think the trees are well mature and could be doubled in size as with the furniture scale, and yes deffo need soft shadows, and add a few grass clumps

inkydigit

looks good, agree with what has already been mentione, i.e. soft shadows etc...
cheers
Jason

masonspappy

All,
Thanks for the feedback.  Every suggestion is good, but the one that stood out was using soft shadows. When I applied that, that photo-realistic aspect jumped appreciably!!   Thanks everyone!
- Cam
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Quote from: inkydigit on February 19, 2011, 07:34:42 AM
looks good, agree with what has already been mentione, i.e. soft shadows etc...
cheers
Jason

pfrancke

really cool - I especially like the stove object.