First attempt

Started by FlyLaika, June 29, 2011, 03:33:17 PM

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FlyLaika

My first render. Just started playing with T2. Took 5 evenings:) Critiques are welcome.

inkydigit

welcome Moon_Lizard!
great start!
look forward to seeing more!

Henry Blewer

This is a good start. 8) I like the curved contrail in the sky.
http://flickr.com/photos/njeneb/
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FlyLaika


ascard

Wow  :o thats soooooooooooo waaaaaaaay much better of what i've done!! Hehehe still figuring out how to a scene like this one, a beach kinda scene. Good work!

ajcgi

Yeah excellent first render. Good balance of sand and rocks. Really like the 3 rocks piled on the right.

Mahnmut

Good balance of rocks -so to say ;)

TheBadger

Real good FlyLaika!

The only thing I don't like is the (seemingly) un-natural shapes of the rocks on the right side. I do like how you placed them though.
I would love to see an animation where the camera stays put, but the boat moves across the water and perhaps there could be some movement of the clouds.

I can almost hear the soft breeze and the sound of birds off camera now.
It has been eaten.

Draigr

That's a very impressive first job. Way better then anything I'm doing!

Seriously, keep it up.

Also, add complexity to the terrain, it's still looking fairly plain and you can tell it's a rendering still.