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Offline Mor

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #15 on: September 02, 2011, 12:13:04 PM »
Replaced the latest version with 1920x1080 and higher quality version.

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #16 on: September 02, 2011, 12:52:55 PM »
Very good! You've really done a good job putting the HD Pines into some great looking, serene scenery.  I think I would have adjusted sharpness and saturation and exposure just a bit each.

If you don't mind, I've tried it already to show what I mean: https://img.skitch.com/20110902-gcu1dymwf7ty65ast4t3hibdse.jpg

Cheers,
Frank

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Re: Pine Forest
« Reply #17 on: September 02, 2011, 01:15:25 PM »
Very good! You've really done a good job putting the HD Pines into some great looking, serene scenery.  I think I would have adjusted sharpness and saturation and exposure just a bit each.

If you don't mind, I've tried it already to show what I mean: https://img.skitch.com/20110902-gcu1dymwf7ty65ast4t3hibdse.jpg

Cheers,
Frank

Looks good. Feel free to adjust it as much as you wish, I'm so beginner at postwork :D Should I render it even bigger?

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Re: Pine Forest
« Reply #18 on: September 02, 2011, 01:23:09 PM »
Should I render it even bigger?

As you wish :)
But it's already great at that size!

btw: check your pm, please

Cheers,
Frank

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #19 on: September 02, 2011, 02:17:01 PM »
Great piece!! :)

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #20 on: September 03, 2011, 02:13:50 PM »
Thanks!

I made one more version with more water shown.

http://www.melnworld.com/tg2/pine%20forest%20wide.jpg
(2600x1083)

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #21 on: September 03, 2011, 02:35:58 PM »

As an image i am not very keen on this...

But...it looks very natural and i would be proud if i did made this , Mor  ;)
Especially the last one!

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #22 on: September 03, 2011, 05:44:21 PM »
Thanks!

I made one more version with more water shown.

http://www.melnworld.com/tg2/pine%20forest%20wide.jpg
(2600x1083)

oh, this one is awesome !!!


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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #23 on: September 04, 2011, 08:00:05 AM »
Indeed, that's what I meant with more water. The narrow line of water bothered me in the first images. I like it very much. But what is the dark thing in the water, an exploded stone? And the bluish haze between the trees is a bit too bluish I'd say. You did a great job with the water line, and the subtle vegetation between the trees. This inspires me to do a lakeside view as well...

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #24 on: September 04, 2011, 10:05:55 AM »
Indeed, that's what I meant with more water. The narrow line of water bothered me in the first images. I like it very much. But what is the dark thing in the water, an exploded stone? And the bluish haze between the trees is a bit too bluish I'd say. You did a great job with the water line, and the subtle vegetation between the trees. This inspires me to do a lakeside view as well...

Yes, you were right about the water. The dark thing is edge of stone, but it could be part of fallen tree for example :D The bluish haze bothered me too, but I didn't get rid of it.

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Re: Pine Forest
« Reply #25 on: September 04, 2011, 10:07:36 PM »
The last two are working really well!
It has been eaten.

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Re: Pine Forest WIP
« Reply #26 on: September 06, 2011, 10:55:24 AM »
Thanks!

I made one more version with more water shown.

http://www.melnworld.com/tg2/pine%20forest%20wide.jpg
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 :o :o
very very nice!

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Re: Pine Forest
« Reply #27 on: September 06, 2011, 03:16:17 PM »
Very nice looking render ;)
I would like to see this one at dusk and with a little mist.

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Terje
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Re: Pine Forest
« Reply #28 on: September 06, 2011, 11:29:27 PM »
tree on ground will have more broken limbs point up and some point sides, not so many long ones and needs broken pieces to be near on ground where they fall.