Solus

[inkydigit]

all work by me, vegetation by: Lightning, Mr Lamppost and Klas (thanks!)No postwork, just jpegged.
thanks for taking time to view/comment/critique etc., as these are always welcome and appreciated.

[McNistor]

Nice.
There's one problem though. The tree's scale seems off: too small.

[Dune]

You can't really tell. Perhaps the rocks and bushes are rather large. It's no problem I think. If you make it bigger it might take too much attention. The only thing that I would change is some more color variation; perhaps bleached dry grass to get more drama in the foreground.

[TheBadger]

Lower the horizon a little.

[Mor]

Nice barren look. Difficult to say does it need anything changed.

[Kadri]

I like this , inkydigit 

No sure if this needs other adjustments...
Maybe TheBadger's suggestion about lowering the horizon and Dune's about the colors...

[Luc]

Maybe rocks and floor could have more color variations ?

Else already a nice picture

luc

[inkydigit]

thanks everyone!
I did have some thoughts about the the tree size, and this was about the scale I wanted(and it is one of my favourite models!) I may experiment with fov/pov etc, as for the rocks and surface colours, maybe I need to rethink my technique (pretty quick and easy to control) but maybe need some less subtle changes!
I will attempt another scene with a similar theme...(along with the billions of others I have in my mind!)
I will keep you posted....
cheers
Jason

[Zairyn Arsyn]

i dig the mood in this render... the lighting too as well

nice work.

[inkydigit]

cheers Z...I forgot to say, I thought someone might have liked/disliked the clouds...I was very happy with the wispy cirrus effect....serendipitous to some extent, but logically planned!!!

[choronr]

The clouds fit the scene beautifully. I'm in agreement about the dried grasses and other plants; need to adjust the colors such that they contrast more against the ground/rocks. In all, a nice composition.