flying UFO, fly

Started by swissAdA, October 10, 2011, 11:53:31 AM

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swissAdA

a new render is finish.




Orginal: http://swissada.deviantart.com/#/d4ceo00

I hope you like it.

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P.S. My text is always translated with Google  http://swissada.deviantart.com/

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Kadri


Lovely :)

I have a little range-scale problem with the UFO but that is me probably.

Pentagular Dark

Quote from: Kadri on October 10, 2011, 09:18:11 PM
[...]I have a little range-scale problem with the UFO but that is me probably.
Well judging by the tree reflection on the UFO, I would say the UFO is in the foreground, and fairly small.
GAH!!! Don't look down here! Look at the posts man!

Dune

I'd say it's a two-seater. I really like the render, very nice lighting and detail, very smooth. Great background, absolutely astonishing. But there are two things that I would have done differently; the path is too obtrusive and too straight, IMHO. Maybe a bit too light as well. The edges could have some smaller and spread tufts of grass and perhaps some mosses. I think you didn't angle the original grass object. A few degrees would take out the 'straightness' of the grass. 

FrankB

I like this one. I have to agree that the background is astonishingly real. Very good job on this one.
Not so keen on the foreground, though. Actually in itself it isn't bad, but compared to the awesome background it's too CG.

Cheers,
Frank

ra

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background is too hazy for such clear day

RichTwo

The sci-fi geek in me says to make the UFO about a thousand times larger and hovering over the mountain - then slagging the top of it off with  some kind of green light beam.  But nice composition!
They're all wasted!

Jonathan

Nice render - I agree that the haze is a bit too strong...and by the way, where did you find the ferns? :)
Every problem is an opportunity, but there are so many opportunities it is a problem!

swissAdA

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Jonathan

Thanks for the info :) As Deep Purple sang, Keep Space Truckin' !
Every problem is an opportunity, but there are so many opportunities it is a problem!