Hi man.
Ok I'll play.
The last image is starting to get a little to busy. You seem to be playing with a lot of ideas, which is cool, but choose what your trying to say. If you find you have more to say then one image can convey clearly, than make more than one image. Do a series.
There are to many titans in the last image. Keep the two!...or three that matter. the others are in the way. Go back to your first images in this thread, though they are less detailed they are working better. I think, because they are less cluttered for a start.
The new clouds are very surreal. This is fine, but the rest of your image strikes me as a play on classicism. The two insult one another, both in terms of visual aesthetics and meaning. Make a choice!