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Zlain's old dirt road Final
Zlain's old dirt road Final
Started by Zairyn Arsyn, March 28, 2013, 06:31:52 PM
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
#30
April 05, 2013, 01:34:51 AM
I think this looks really nice. You might consider a little more glare still, but it's a huge improvement already. Road is also great now.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 05, 2013, 04:09:55 AM
Very nice.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 06, 2013, 12:07:21 AM
i decided to add a pop of bushes, from Mr. Lampposts bush pack
changed the clouds some - in the last one they were overlapping the sun, though it didnt make much of a difference, i changed it anyways, theirs a bit of a difference.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 06, 2013, 12:41:06 AM
Nice - I like the soft, almost gentle lighting
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 06, 2013, 12:43:20 AM
i should have another large good quality render by sometime tomorrow,
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 06, 2013, 12:44:31 PM
a larger version
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 06, 2013, 01:05:36 PM
I like the mood the gentle and soft light gives to this image.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v5
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April 06, 2013, 04:23:18 PM
i'm thinking about changing the flower objects, to the dogwrose bush w/ flowers (i got some feedback elsewhere)
what do you guys think?
i'll do a render and post it.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
#38
April 06, 2013, 10:50:31 PM
different flowers...
nwda dogrose tgos
C&C, suggestions, welcome.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
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April 07, 2013, 12:22:14 AM
I think the flower blossoms are too close to the same color as your dry grass. Maybe turn the diffuse color up some. I like these flowers better than the previous ones. They just need to stand out more.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
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April 07, 2013, 02:43:53 AM
Nice flowers, but I agree with Yossam. If they would be deeper/lighter blue it would give a great contrast to the warm glow of the rest. I think you need to reduce the pinpricks of shine (either size or brightness) on the ground pebbles. It all looks kind of dry and they attract just a little too much attention.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
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April 07, 2013, 01:08:23 PM
the light and mood here is perfect, the detailing too, a great image so far!
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
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April 07, 2013, 03:01:24 PM
currently the flowers are now a deeper color of red, from what they were before, but i could change the diffuse texture next time i render.
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
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April 07, 2013, 03:09:21 PM
new flower color, will post another version with a different color soon
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Re: Zlain's old dirt road v6
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April 07, 2013, 05:28:18 PM
blue flowers
C&C welcome
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