Hannes, I can understand how my words didn't quite register as it's quite a common phrase here in the UK. Should have realized, sorry. What I meant is that you have created an image which tells a story. It's for the viewer to follow it through and realize there is going to be one hell of an impact at the end of the thirty seconds. Brilliant! Photoshop blurs might just have helped, but I doubt it. However, just for the hell of it I am going to put your image into Photoshop and try it out myself. (Since I've been teaching PS for years I ought to be able to do something with it I reckon).
rat.