Old Cottage

Started by ADE, July 07, 2013, 05:10:34 AM

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ADE

All models by me...C/C welcome

Hannes

These are quite nice models.
The lighting makes the image look a bit flat. The sun is almost behind the camera I assume. If you'd put it a bit more to the side you'd get more depth.

TheBadger

I like the details and composition and subject. My only crit is that it seems really flat. Although it is even across the image. So that is good.
The part I like best is the little doorway onto the forest we get on the left side. THis adds a sense of a much bigger world surrounding the primary subject. A good story could go along with this.

It has been eaten.

ADE

another POX of the same set up....

ADE


TheBadger

The light feels much more dynamic here. I like it.
It has been eaten.

Dune

I like it. But you should add a little fill light on the left of the house, and use some bump on the stones!