Farm WIP

Started by mindsap, August 19, 2013, 12:40:41 AM

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mindsap

WIP I don't think I like the composition.  and glare from silo. 
Once a King always a King but once a night is enough...

Dune

It's a good start at least.
PRO: composition.
CON: the big tree, I would change that to a better quality of push it backward a little, more grasses and maybe flowers at the edge of the field, maybe denser wheat. I would also increase the contrast (less glow in sky perhaps) plus add a no shadow fill light at the right so that the silo for instance gets a little reflection on the right side as well from bounced light. Makes it rounder.

mhaze

Ditto Dune's comments - maybe move the tractor, it's all a little busy in the centre.

EoinArmstrong

I agree with Dune... the atmo and lighting are lovely

alessandro

Nice WIP, can't wait to see the final result.
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TheBadger

It looks like a cartoon. I think it looks very good this way. But if you want a photo, then I agree with whats already been said.
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