Shore

Started by yossam, September 05, 2013, 10:26:26 AM

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yossam

Was working on another scene and got really frustrated............this was to kinda clear my head.

kaedorg

very very nice....   cleared my head too  :)

Kadri

Yes this looks nice. I would maybe only play with contrast-gamma a little. I like it , Yossam!
Is this a little low AA-Detail Yossam ?

yossam

I think it's the lighting..............I was pissed off from fooling with the other scene and it shows. I am going to work on it some more.  ;)


inkydigit

I like this one... nice moody light... the beginnings of some great details too!
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yossam

Changed the lighting..............any better?

Gannaingh

I like it! I want to go for a swim. The shadows seem sharp to me, are you using soft shadows?

yossam

No, I should have. It will be in the next render.  :-[

Dune

Really nice and moody.What grass are you using, by the way?

mr-miley

Outstanding render, I really like the "feel" of this  :) Great work!
I love the smell of caffine in the morning

Oshyan

Oh, I rather like this! Soft shadows would be good, yes. Only problem for me overall is it's quite dim and gloomy, like a dawn, or very hazy day. Any reason for that? Maybe something in post processing? I'd be tempted to increase exposure or sunlight strength by 2-3x, in fact; it really should be much brighter in my view. But maybe I'm imagining a different time of day than you. Either way, nicely setup and detailed scene. Very "ordinary" but very realistic.

- Oshyan

yossam

Soft shadows added..................

Lady of the Lake

This is nice.....dawn or dusk, I like the lighting.  Perhaps a critter getting a drink at water's edge?

yossam

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Thanks for the comments everyone.  ;D


Dune................there are 7 populations ( 3 varieties ). Ornamental grass V.2, Phragmites dry, and corndog grass in the water.


The lighting is supposed to be early morning, just after sunrise. I had the mist a whole lot denser in the first render, too dense actually.


Lyla..............couldn't figure out what type critter to add. I had a duck in the water at one time...................he looked lonely all by himself so I took him out. Any suggestions?