CactiDesertRoad_v02

[ndeewolfwood]

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V2 post 09
Some desert work.
Pop from xfrog (the old south west usa bundle)

Something weird about the road scale to me. Need to tweak this.

[yossam]

Do you have DOF on...........the foreground looks out of focus. Or maybe my eyes are really getting bad. 


I like your scene..........I don't think it's the road scale. I think maybe it's the POV.

[Kadri]

Try it without DOF.
It tends to make things look like miniatures sometimes.
Feels like the roadrunner will pass by suddenly .
I like the scene

[choronr]

I like this one too. I'm thinking that maybe the haze might be a bit too high; also, consider increasing the red sky decay and reducing the gamma to 1.9

[TheBadger]

Looks real good for the most part. To me the blur in front looks like heat coming of the road.

[Bjur]

I like it also, it looks very movie like with this kind of DOF and frame.

I'm imagine myself a convoy into your scene at mid range, or this one known here:

[DannyG]

Very nice DOF and light

[Lady of the Lake]

I agree the foreground seems out of focus.....crop the bottom 1/4.  :-)

[mhaze]

Good work but I'm not keen on the DOF and the placing of the cacti etc seem very even - blending with a PF will clump the veg in a more natual way

[ndeewolfwood]

Thanks for all comments guys.
Most concern are valid and i used them a lot.
Still in progress...but it's moving forward.
V2
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[Kadri]

I like the first comp much more.
It is your image of course but i would have just lowered the DOF
(you could adjust the distance for only the very near side on the road etc.) or get rid of it .

[TheBadger]

Keep working it! its a good scene.

[kaedorg]

Sense of scale seems better in the  2nd view but i prefer the 1st POV.
Anyway it is a very nice scene.