Stables

Started by yossam, March 30, 2014, 04:43:25 PM

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yossam

Something different............. :)

TheBadger

Those horses live in a nicer house than I do!  :-[

It has been eaten.

archonforest

Very nice scene ;)
There is one thing that keeps pulling my eye. Not sure if the mountains are high enough for having snow on them. They are pretty close to the house where everything is green and as far as I know the snow level is around 2-3000 meters? And those mountains does not look like that high for me ??? I might be wrong though... :D
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yossam

Agree about the snow.............climate change took care of that problem. Changed the lighting.................. :)

j meyer

The repetitiveness of the textures on the model cries for some procedural
dirt at least when a model is that close to the camera.
Just add some Power Fractals in conjunction with a transform shader set to
use world space and break up that repetitiveness.
It's easily done and usually an improvement.
Another way would be to mix image based textures,but that can be a bit more
demanding.
Keep them coming!

dorianvan

Nice image, but I would change the sun back around to see a bit of the horses though.
-Dorian

yossam

One mo' time...................... :)

Hannes

You were just a few minutes faster. I just wanted to reply that I like your second image more than the first one, and here is the third try. Looks great, although I really liked the lighting of the second one. Although the horses are barely visible. The only thing I'd like to criticize is the uniform texturing of the roof. There should be some variation and some dirt. A little brighter maybe. And it should be a lot more worn. At the moment it looks brand new. Mabe it is, but imho an older roof would be nicer.

Lady of the Lake

I like the first one the best....sans the snow.

dorianvan

This is looking better. The new sun angle really brings out the detail and shadows of the fore "ground" area nicely. I agree also with Hannes about the house/roof - you could beat it up some. This could also be cool as a stormy shot; or just a creepy, misty, middle of the night shot.
-Dorian

yossam

Think this one is too saturated...............I give up.  :)

yossam

I kinda like this one.............onward.  :)

Hannes

Yes!!! The roof is perfect now! what an improvement!
Some more suggestions (don't give up yet!!! ;D):
the plants look a bit flat lit. Maybe the translucency settings are too high or maybe you disabled GISD? Try increasing occlusion weight a bit, maybe to 2.
And I think soft shadows would make the very sharp shadow on the stables look more natural.

Dune

Yes, that's the first thing I noticed too, the translucency of the grass. Set it to 0.2 max, maybe.

yossam

I already have occlusion weight at 2............better start adjusting the translucency. I may change the tree pops out for something else they were really bright green, came that way from x-frog. Any suggestions?  ???