Hut into the wild

[kalwalt]

Quite an evolution! The upper part of the image looks very good. Not quite sure about the phragmites. They are all perfectly straight, which looks a bit unnatural.

Thank's @Hannes! yes, the upper part i think is good, i will not touch. I think Phragmites are not the right plants for this image, should growth near a lake or so, instead i will put a bunch of flowers plants like in a Monet painting...

[N810]

lol yea, phragmites is 6'-8' marsh grass. 
you shouldn't see this near hills or mountains.

Ps. scene looks greatly improved over the first one.

[kalwalt]

lol yea, phragmites is 6'-8' marsh grass. 
you shouldn't see this near hills or mountains.

Ps. scene looks greatly improved over the first one.

yes, exactly that's why i will use another plant!

[Luc]

Already very nice improvements compared to first post   

luc

[kalwalt]

Already very nice improvements compared to first post   

luc

Thank you, Luc! 

[kalwalt]

Partial rendering: A little improvement: less grass near the hut, added a shader to randomize the colors of the grass (but need to be improved i think) and added some flowers as test instead of Phragmites, but maybe without flowers could be also nice...
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[kalwalt]

Now without other plants in the middle of the grass, a bit more darker grass, maybe was better before, but i apllied a random color on the grass you can see some parts more yellowish and other greenish.
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[archonforest]

the color of the grass throw me off the picture. I think this grass looks supers fresh and new while the rest of the veggies are more washed out...I would try to choose a different green probably mixed with some lighter green like what u have on the trees..

[kalwalt]

I think this grass looks supers fresh and new while the rest of the veggies are more washed out.

i have the same impression but very difficult to choose the color, i used different shaders in chain to gain this effect, before with only the default shader i used one type of color, if i use the same colour in my elaborated shaders doesnt make the same result, i think i have to tweak a bit the settings.
Honestly i like much more the green color of the grass in the last picture i did ( hut into the wild02.jpeg)....

[archonforest]

perhaps u reduce the amount of grass so the underground brownish soil can be visible a bit?

[kalwalt]

Maybe this version could be fine, i wondering if is better to change a bit the shot,i mean to raise a bit a camera and tilt it to the top... will see this. 
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[kalwalt]

I think that covering a bit more some parts of the hills give a more nice result, i will cover also some parts not dressed by the trees with the grass to make uniform the image.

[Dune]

You're getting there, but you need more color variation in the grass and some more species of weed/grass.

[mhaze]

Ditto Dune.  You're learning fast great to see your progress.

[Hannes]

Second that. Plus the flowers are way too large and the trees are a bit too bright and could use some color variation as well.
You're really getting there. Looks already very good.