Outdoors

Started by otakar, August 15, 2014, 12:49:52 PM

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otakar

After too long a period of unfinished renders, here is finally something I got to completion. It started after seeing some great work here with streams and rivers. I wanted to concentrate on the creek bed at first, but it ended up a bit differently. It's amazing to see what vegetation can do as it 'overgrows' the terrain you have originally sculpted. I am always drawn to [placing] trees in the scene, even though I appreciate rocks a lot :)

Credits:

stumps: MGebhart
Pines: Xfrog (freebie)
Bushes: MrLamppost
Grass and flowers: Walli
Birches: VizPeople (freebie)

yossam


choronr

Very good with fine quality, lighting and vegetation distribution. My only suggestion is to move the tree in the foreground/right over to the right border where one sees only about 1/2 of it and more of the water.

Dune

I agree with Bob; would be nice to see a little more of the creek. If you're taking this further. And then maybe make the bald area more like a path, with some pebbles and gravel?

bobbystahr

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Great pic and I do like it is but as Ulco says I'd also not have been able to resist putting a path in myself. Thanks BTW for the unintentional heads up re:  VizPeople....great trees them birches.

Just dl'd them and WOW...best birches ever. Very like the ones you see here in Manitoba.....Do y think they're procedural from with in max or modeled by hand, hand rolled as it were?
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

otakar

Thank you for your feedback! Sometimes things are better left obscured, I guess. :) I tried moving the tree but the subsequent render brought out a bunch of issues that were now clearly visible. I will have to give this more thought. As for the path, I intentionally built it looking rather soft - this is supposed to be sandy ground, so no rocks.

Yes, I agree that the birches are nice. Good to have a few variations as well.