Autumn

Started by Lady of the Lake, October 02, 2015, 10:44:56 AM

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Lady of the Lake

Thanks for looking.  Wanted the pumpkins to be the focus of this but I didn't quite get the balance right.   Tried moving things around but just couldn't get what I liked.

fleetwood

#1
You could bring the camera in tighter and lower on the pumpkins with just a bit of the building in the frame. Maybe the mountains barely showing or not even needed for that kind of shot.

bobbystahr

agree w/fleetwood, try that Lyla.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Lady of the Lake

Trying out the suggestions.  Thanks.

bobbystahr

#4
Nice, and it's a big favour to the fence as well...a nice one I'd not really noticed in the other render.
I thought that there was a scale issue with it in wide view as the objects looked out of scale/too large to be in the same scene as the mountains.
Do you work to 'real world' scale? It,when doing real world scenes, makes a big difference I find. Mr Lamppost has a package where you load one of 3 .tgd files and a grid appears at 0,0,0 with posts at the corners. Then you load your tree, barn, fence, whatever into that and scale it by the rulers on the posts and the grid on the ground...very handy. I then make not of the scale adjustment I made and put it in the objects notes in it dir. but you could add it to the objects name as well. I just keep a notepad list of trees I use a lot and objects get a readme in their dir.
Here's a link to his download page where it lives with other cool handy stuff.

http://www.mrlamppost.com/tg2/downloads/objects.htm#basic_bush_pack
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

DocCharly65

This one is much nicer! I like it  :)

kaedorg

I prefer the second one too.

David