The Right Stuff

Started by yossam, August 24, 2016, 02:50:33 PM

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yossam

 ;D


AP

Very retro sci-fi. Liking the sunset and colors a lot.    8)

Dune

Agreed. Perhaps the deck lights a bit more subdued and warm in color?

DocCharly65

#4
Especially agree with Chris: Cool retro scify!  :)
I personally love that small pice of shore with reed (I guess it shoud be reed?)
Ulcos suggestion is one thing you could change - maybe it also could be interesting to change it into more slightly blue/green light (atificial neon light) for having a contrast between the natural sunset and the technical stuff. A bit darker as well? ...

bobbystahr

Nice one, agree with Dune's assessment.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Hetzen

That's a great landscape in a great atmosphere.

I think you could do something better with the model lighting. There's a funny story there and I think you need to make those parts stand out more. I'd turn down your lamps and put a spot or two on the rocket and maybe some red lights on the ramp (which could be a luminous texture).

yossam

Made some adjustments............. :)

bobbystahr

something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Dune

Oh yeah, MUCH nicer. The light is great.

DocCharly65