GLorius Saturday - WIP

[masonspappy]

Still a WIP, and the boy in the orange shirt doesn't seem posed quite right, but can't put my finger on it.
As always  C&C's are very welcome.

[Dune]

Pretty good already. I don't see much wrong with that boy. What I do think is the 'thing' the right bicycle is leaning against should have some better textures. It's a treetrunk I suppose. And I would add more low veggies.

[luvsmuzik]

Great sycamores! Love the bark on those. And what is he pointing at? Great render.

[archonforest]

Very nice render. Love the abundance of colors. Well done.

[bobbystahr]

Pretty good already. I don't see much wrong with that boy. What I do think is the 'thing' the right bicycle is leaning against should have some better textures. It's a treetrunk I suppose. And I would add more low veggies.

Agree...reminiscent of that nice summer afternoon feeling that I recall as a ute biking along the river trails here....bit of work on that one object and some more ground cover veg which in my area proliferate these areas, I'd call this a final....

[DocCharly65]

A little work on the object behind the right hand bike?  -  Ok 

Anyway for me it's an absolutly great render. Looks for me like a 1965 version of Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn.

[Lady of the Lake]

You capture childhood so very well.  Great image.

[masonspappy]

Added vegetation and texture to the sycamore tree and a few other minor tweaks.
The bark coloring on the sycamore tends to a yellowish/brown/grey  (as opposed to the more common greenish/white/grey) and is fairly common in the US Ohio Valley region.
And the boy is pointing at either a riverboat, a whale or the loch ness monster - never can be sure what's going on in a 10-year-old's mind.
Appreciate the comments very much!   

****** Crud, just realized I uploaded the wrong picture. Will correct that tonight.
****** Correct picture uploaded 

[masonspappy]

A few small changes and I think I'll let it go at that.
Thanks all for the feedback

[TheBadger]

really nice one cam.

[Dune]

Turned out really well. I like the boulder more than the trunk. Good work! There's one thing that would bother me, but I won't harass you with it.

[masonspappy]

There's one thing that would bother me, but I won't harass you with it.

What's that?  Would appreciate any observations you've got

[Dune]

The fallen leaves, especially on the right, are floating a bit. That's all.

[Agura Nata]

great job, and Dune has a fine eye :-)=;)

[zaxxon]

A sweet, idyllic scene. A Norman Rockwell-esque illustration of childhood and innocence, very nicely done!