Autumn afternoon

Started by Cocateho, May 02, 2017, 08:35:18 PM

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Cocateho

A first pass on this one, definitely feels like it could be tweaked a bit and things added but I'm pretty happy with the basic layout so far.

luvsmuzik

Pretty pretty! You do not post near enough. Very nice!

Hannes

Beautiful!! And very realistic. Maybe a little bit too sharp for my taste.

Rumburak

That's really beautiful!

DocCharly65

Quote from: Hannes on May 03, 2017, 01:06:20 AM
Beautiful!! And very realistic. Maybe a little bit too sharp for my taste.

Yes a really slight DoF would make it perfect! The foreground is a bit too sharp.

But anyway very beautiful!

masonspappy

Echo others. Beautiful!

bobbystahr

Maybe flowers or stones poking thru the grass but lovely so far, maybe a bit sharp as hannes said but some DoF would soften that.
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archonforest

Stunning!! Great colors.  8)
Yeah a little dof would be great at the front.
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Cocateho

Little update, tried to make the foreground not feel so empty, added a little dof but it's kind of hard to tell.

masonspappy

There's a lot to like about this. I Especially like the fall colors that are naturally/randomly  smatterings of green, yellow, red.
I think the foreground would benefit by adding something that breaks up the 'sameness' across the bottom third of the image. 
But all things considered it's a really nice render.


archonforest

Quote from: Cocateho on May 05, 2017, 09:19:10 AM
Little update, tried to make the foreground not feel so empty, added a little dof but it's kind of hard to tell.

Great update! Dof is kinda invisible though...
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Cocateho

This is a color corrected version, slightly warmer. I've noticed a big difference in how warm my monitor is compared to my phone screen, so I'm interested if this looks better or not to you guys than the original.

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