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Offline zaxxon

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #15 on: April 13, 2018, 04:13:37 PM »
The landscape elements are excellent! And I am a big fan of trains running thru beautiful panoramas, and this is a lovely scene. I agree that the blur belongs, however it's the color values of the train that seem a bit overpowering. 'Greying' out the values would help the train to sit a bit more into the landscape imo. Some weathering and grunge in the textures would be great, but probably not necessary at the distance.  All that aside, I really like the image.

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #16 on: April 13, 2018, 04:59:24 PM »
The landscape elements are excellent! And I am a big fan of trains running thru beautiful panoramas, and this is a lovely scene. I agree that the blur belongs, however it's the color values of the train that seem a bit overpowering. 'Greying' out the values would help the train to sit a bit more into the landscape imo. Some weathering and grunge in the textures would be great, but probably not necessary at the distance.  All that aside, I really like the image.
Thank you zaxxon. I will play a bit with the colors of the train.
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Re: My train is back
« Reply #17 on: April 13, 2018, 07:43:41 PM »
Lovely train scene and if it were fresh out of the station on it's way across N America but in VIA Rail colours it could be in Canada. Maybe a bit of grey in the colour channel would desaturate the seemingly over bright colour.
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Re: My train is back
« Reply #18 on: April 13, 2018, 08:19:49 PM »
Yes, I think perhaps reducing saturation of the train colors would help make it look more natural in the environment. Also if there is no specular on it already, it might help to add some subtle, diffuse specular.

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #19 on: April 13, 2018, 09:29:03 PM »
If that is the object I remember....good luck with that. I think it looks great! The passenger trains I am familiar with were actually kept quite well maintained, agreeing with bobbystahr here.  A little specular might help. :)

Vegetation quite impressive.

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #20 on: April 15, 2018, 07:25:06 AM »
Thank you guys. Rendering a new one with less prominent blue color.
...many rooms to explore but the doors look the same...

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Re: My train is back(final)
« Reply #21 on: April 15, 2018, 11:44:43 AM »
Okay here is the final version.  :)
...many rooms to explore but the doors look the same...

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #22 on: April 15, 2018, 09:08:52 PM »
Okay here is the final version.  :)

I still like it...
something borrowed,
something Blue.
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Re: My train is back
« Reply #23 on: April 16, 2018, 05:41:10 AM »
I really like this render! Veggies and train very well fit together.
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Re: My train is back
« Reply #24 on: April 16, 2018, 06:01:48 AM »
Great scene, looks very realistic, especially the vegetation.

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #25 on: April 16, 2018, 06:47:16 AM »
Thank you all. :)
...many rooms to explore but the doors look the same...

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #26 on: April 16, 2018, 08:19:52 AM »
Looks great!

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Re: My train is back(final)
« Reply #27 on: April 16, 2018, 01:34:52 PM »
Okay here is the final version.  :)

The train looks so much better with the blur reduction, really feel emersed now. Great work! Still so amazed by people's work here. :O
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Re: My train is back
« Reply #28 on: April 16, 2018, 01:53:46 PM »
Thx guys. :) Glad u like it.
...many rooms to explore but the doors look the same...

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Re: My train is back
« Reply #29 on: April 16, 2018, 06:26:08 PM »
Glad you subdued the colors.....great image.

 

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