Dust

Started by Kadri, June 03, 2018, 10:02:30 PM

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Kadri


At least something more then a doodle.
This image is more then 90 % or so finished to my eye. But i have 2 questions.

I wanted this one to be a little dark. But is it too dark?
On one of my monitors it looks good, in the second one it might be a little dark to others. Not sure.

The wreck on the right lower side does it look Ok (finished) to you?
I might add kind of a little trail of wreck parts from the lower right to the main wreck but not sure if it needs more.

luvsmuzik

No criticism here. Shards in front of the main light source would appear dark as you have them. Outstanding render!

Dune

It's rather dark, but that does help the gloomy mood. And you have to see at max size to really see the wreck, as the background there is rather dark too.
The wreck itself might have some part added that looks more like whatever has been wrecked. It's 'just' a bunch of parts now. If it's a spaceship, maybe a wing or engine, or anything more recognizable.
IMO.
But I like the concept very much!

bobbystahr

Mostly good one. Displays fine on both my monitors but I agree with Dune on the wreckage which just looks like space junk and not a wrecked vessel at the moment.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Kadri


Thanks all.
I agree about the wreck. I was already changing some parts in that aspect.
How about this one?

Kadri


It looked like it needed a little crop on the lower side.
So i changed the look just a little without loosing much of the view.

DocCharly65

Oh yeah, thats a convincing render of a space catastrophy/accident...
The last renders give in fact a better impression that it could have been a vessel or a station.

Kadri


Thanks Nils.
The last one is the final probably.

Hannes

Super cool!!! Great image! And yes, it depends on the monitor. I have two screens as well, and on one of it it's quite dark, and the other one looks good.


Dune

That's it, Kadri!


Agura Nata

Cool stuff Kadri!
"Live and Learn!"


bobbystahr

Nailed it...tells a story now; well done Kadri!
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist