Facing off

Started by mhaze, November 23, 2020, 04:17:29 AM

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mhaze

Two watch towers mark each side of the border.

sboerner

Nice. Has a real Tolkienesque feeling to it.

WAS

I like the dark mood and silhouette look of the towers against the sky. Great work.

DocCharly65

Quote from: sboerner on November 23, 2020, 04:42:10 PMNice. Has a real Tolkienesque feeling to it.
Echo. I like it, too!

Dune

Great. But I would get rid of that dark mountain in the left below corner, so the water is opening up.

mhaze

Thanks all. Dune I'll try that it was there for a reason but looking again I might be able to remove it.

Dune

Just a simple shape masking a surface shader and set to smooth, after the mountains.

mhaze

The mountain was a SSS but the two lots of water are different heights. I've just spent an hour fiddling but the best I can do doesn't change much and actually makes it worse. Oh well...

Dune

Ah, I see. You don't see the differences in height. The thing that bothered me was the stark contrast in the left down corner, attracting too much attention. I think it would even be more subtle if you'd fill it all up with land. Maybe hang some low veil of mist between the towers.

mhaze


Hannes

Me too. Lovely image. Indeed tolkienesque.

mhaze

New version.

Dune


mhaze

Thank you for he suggestion :)

DocCharly65