the claw

Started by ra, February 22, 2009, 02:12:25 PM

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ra

Hi Gang,

I'd like to introduce my latest render "the claw".
C&c are welcome.
Objects (Gras and Bonsai) made by Klas, thanks a lot!  :D





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cyphyr

VERY atmospheric work here :)
I bet at the bottom of that cliff theres a big pile of bones and rocks!
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Hannes

Exceptional!! Nevertheless two critics (matter of taste!):
-you used a "through camera"-mapping for the lighter rock texture, didn't you? Maybe you could try creating additional (projecting-) cameras and textures for each the side and the front with the appropriate orientation to make it less obvious. Just an idea.

- the fog could be a little more "smokey". I know that sometimes fog looks exactly like yours, but I'd love to see more noise.

rcallicotte

#4
Oh, that is cool.  Very nice technically, but especially creative.

[edit - I agree with Hannes about the clouds.]
So this is Disney World.  Can we live here?

ra

#5
Thanks a lot guys!

@Hannes: Yes, you are right, I used "through camera". I used an additional shader to  darken the surface though. I thought nobody would notice  ;D

I am thinking of a second version of this pic, we will see  ;)
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