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Offline aymenk2003

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...dans le marécage ...
« on: August 30, 2009, 02:11:18 AM »
any comments about distribution and contrast...
thanks to inkydigit...

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Re: ...dans le marécage ...
« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2009, 03:08:47 AM »
I think it needs a Nazgul on wings and some scared little people. ;D

I would add more grasses at differing heights and densities. Maybe some low bushes, but not too many. I think the trees should have more clumps, on the highest land.
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Re: ...dans le marécage ...
« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2009, 03:28:51 AM »
thank njeneb ...
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« Reply #3 on: August 30, 2009, 12:27:34 PM »
Watch Lord of the Rings, The Two Towers. After Frodo and Samwise capture Gollum. Gollum leads them into the Dead Marshes. I did not like the way they did the dead in the movie. Seemed more Margarette Wiess and Tracy Hickman, DragonLance to me. AT least I thought it would fit those books better. But, that's another story....
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« Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 12:43:00 PM »
I really like the terrain. For me, the trees are too prominent - I'd be inclined to place them further away, and off centre.