My first TG2 piece

Started by Raykoid666, September 01, 2009, 01:27:22 PM

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Raykoid666

My first, comment please.

Also, i KNOW it's dull (lighting-wise) and i don't really know how to improve this hmm... maybe some postwork? if there are any suggestions on the postwork, please do share :-)

littlecannon

HI, I'd make the trees about 1/4 - 1/5 of the size they are here and decrease the spacing between them. Maybe move the camera up to the rim of the crater as in the image Oshyan posted in your other thread (Obviously this is your choice and only my opinion). If you have gone with snow, I'd probably change it do dust (slightly light than the main rock) as you have no snow on the trees, so it looks a bit strange. Take the sun up a bit (maybe change the direction... behind you, left or right) and if you have a fast computer, I'd turn on soft shadows in the sun tab and raytrace shadows in the atmosphere tab. Render with some highish settings and see what happens. Let us know if any of this helps.
Cheers, Simon.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...

Raykoid666

well, i postworked and uploaded it a bit before i saw your reply

http://raykoid666.deviantart.com/art/Crater-Lake-Impression-135550425


though as this is only my first i guess i'm allowed a little margin of error here, no? :-)

anyways, i'll be making some more soon :-) thanks for the help!

Seth

Quote from: littlecannon on September 01, 2009, 02:36:58 PM
I'd turn on soft shadows in the sun tab and raytrace shadows in the atmosphere tab.



do not put raytraced shadows on atmo ! use it only if, for example, the sun is showing through a mountain...

Raykoid666

Quote from: Seth on September 01, 2009, 03:23:31 PM
Quote from: littlecannon on September 01, 2009, 02:36:58 PM
I'd turn on soft shadows in the sun tab and raytrace shadows in the atmosphere tab.



do not put raytraced shadows on atmo ! use it only if, for example, the sun is showing through a mountain...

i read that one before :-) so i put it off already knowing that ;-)