storm damage

Started by Kevin F, November 12, 2009, 03:39:46 AM

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Kevin F

Here's a WIP of a scene using Walli's trees (Pine & broken) - thanks Walli, and also Sonshine777's logs. Both modified a little for the snow.
The lighting is not to my liking yet but other than that it's not too bad? - any comments/suggestions  welcome.

inkydigit

this looks very promising!...keep on!

littlecannon

Agreed... maybe change the POV slightly to get in the tops of some trees. It feels like it lacks depth (as you say, your lighting doesn't help at the mo). Or maybe get something (a tree, bush) close to the camera to look past. Promising, so keep at it.
Cheers,
Simon.
I just need to tweak that texture a bit more...

Kadri

Kevin F this image has potential.
I am curious about the texture on the stumps (?) in the  foreground. They seam a little small  to me , or am i wrong?

Kadri.

Kevin F

Quote from: Kadri on November 12, 2009, 03:25:03 PM
Kevin F this image has potential.
I am curious about the texture on the stumps (?) in the  foreground. They seam a little small  to me , or am i wrong?

Kadri.

I see what you mean, they are slightly blurred looking. The texture is the same as used on the pines. But I had to re-orientate them 90 degrees to make the snow effect lay in the correct plane just for these logs. I'll work on that and the lighting.