Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip

Started by Zairyn Arsyn, January 28, 2010, 06:57:00 PM

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Zairyn Arsyn

just started this project a day or so ago...
:)

full resolution ver.:
http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/art/Amphora-luminis-wip-152094799

C & C always welcome
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Walli

wow, thats not a good place for insects though ;-)

EoinArmstrong

Nice concept - I like the clarity and the lighting on the plants

Zairyn Arsyn

walli, i think your Amphora Luminis is the most realistic object i have used so far :)

got another render going right now..
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FrankB

hmm, I don't know... The scene as a whole is not your best, please forgive me saying that. The population is terminates in line with the horizon, and there's little variation on the ground. What if you add a few very low rolling hills, a couple fake rocks and a few other species?

Cheers,
Frank

Henry Blewer

I agree with Frank on this one. This plant needs a tight camera shot, against a rock and/or tree with some interesting stuff around it.

This is a good way to test the object. I don't use so many instances, but I do a render with several rotations and scales represented.
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Zairyn Arsyn

starting off on this project was a troublesome one,
i'm currently remaking most of this scene, different terrain, adding stones, dense patches unusally colored grass underneath the Amphora Luminus..i'll add more stuff as i go along.

i'll have another render out sooner or later
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Henry Blewer

I am Looking forward to see your next render! 8)
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Zairyn Arsyn

here is the latest version i've came up with :)
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choronr

That reddish ground cover sets off the plants nicely.

Henry Blewer

I like the reddish color for the grass also. This is a very good start. Keep going!
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Zairyn Arsyn

im still tweaking the terrain, might add some additional vegitation too
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