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Offline Aenea

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First one - Native American Country
« on: February 22, 2007, 06:53:58 AM »
Started to work on that piece three weeks ago....a learning by doing picture so to speak....
ANY suggestions welcome....especially to make it much more realistic looking!


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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2007, 08:24:05 AM »
nice love it think maybe just the water a bit to unreal but the rest is great

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2007, 11:12:52 AM »
Nice, I agree about the water and maybe the snow cap on the mountan chould be less vertical (though I know this is a fractal bug) it would be nice if you could fix it but its not that vital.

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2007, 01:13:12 PM »
Overall, I think this is a nice image, but you asked for critiques, so here's my personal opinion.  I  like your objects in the foreground, but I feel that they are a bit too small.  In this image, none of them seem to have any kind of substance or strength, so I think that making them just a little bigger (maybe more so along the x- and z-axes than the y-axis) as well as increasing their density would have helped.  Your trees look nice, although I don't really see why they would be so close to the water line when most of the plants can't get that far.  I like the idea of the stones, but try making them a different color.  You could also try making your sand area a fake stones layer and thus have individual grains of sand.  Your water looks nice, except it's maybe a bit too blue in the foreground.  Overall, I like the formations of the background terrain, but I feel that it's hard to get a sense of the scale of the image.  Thus, the mountain peak with snow on it can seem rather unrealistic.

Those are just nitpicky comments, though.  Nice image, overall :P.
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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #4 on: February 22, 2007, 01:56:49 PM »
Very nice Aenea...just a tip tho....adding in more grass wouldnt hurt!
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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #5 on: February 22, 2007, 06:17:21 PM »
I think the wierd vertical bit on top of the mountain would look good if you could get rid of the snow off the vertical bits...

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2007, 06:01:07 AM »
Thanks for all the wonderfull constructive critique....... :)
Go on please....itīs really challenging and an important input for me!

I changed a few things, the water, a bit grass, the fake stones shader....., I managed to get more farn appear after I fixed the mistakes....

Yeah, thatīs the result so far, but Iīm still working....

I tried to get the snow top different, but somehow it hasnīt worked...maybe I had to rise the snow border? As the vertical rifts of this mountain are given by the terrain I canīs change it....or is there a way I havenīt thought of???? Maybe the snow looks a bit better then?

Okay....hereīs the next version of my picture....

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #7 on: February 23, 2007, 01:25:25 PM »
I like the foreground a lot more in this one.  Good job!
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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #8 on: February 23, 2007, 04:25:43 PM »
The water looks much better in the second render...

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #9 on: February 23, 2007, 04:27:30 PM »
The water looks much better in the second render...

I agree, great job!

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #10 on: February 24, 2007, 11:48:42 PM »
The water looks much better in the second render...

I agree also. It even seems to have an illusion of transparency.
good job.

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Re: First one - Native American Country
« Reply #11 on: February 25, 2007, 01:27:36 PM »
Ohhhh, thanks a bunch for your kind response..... :D :D :D :D :D :D

I made some changes on the water using the luminosity.....a havenīt thought about this possibility before and voilá....this came out.....
When Iīm done I share the tgd....but I have to make some changes to the flora and fauna first  ;D need some more trees and some flowers maybe....

Also Iīm still dealing with this snow cap.....it really looks strange with that vertical underground of the mountain.....

Aenea