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Title: Shore
Post by: yossam on September 05, 2013, 10:26:26 AM
Was working on another scene and got really frustrated............this was to kinda clear my head.
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Post by: kaedorg on September 05, 2013, 10:45:41 AM
very very nice....   cleared my head too  :)
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Post by: Kadri on September 05, 2013, 12:38:35 PM
Yes this looks nice. I would maybe only play with contrast-gamma a little. I like it , Yossam!
Is this a little low AA-Detail Yossam ?
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Post by: yossam on September 05, 2013, 12:42:02 PM
I think it's the lighting..............I was pissed off from fooling with the other scene and it shows. I am going to work on it some more.  ;)
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Post by: Kadri on September 05, 2013, 12:44:41 PM
Waiting :)
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Post by: inkydigit on September 05, 2013, 04:47:01 PM
I like this one... nice moody light... the beginnings of some great details too!
:)
J
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Post by: yossam on September 05, 2013, 06:24:55 PM
Changed the lighting..............any better?
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Post by: Gannaingh on September 05, 2013, 09:55:19 PM
I like it! I want to go for a swim. The shadows seem sharp to me, are you using soft shadows?
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Post by: yossam on September 05, 2013, 09:59:59 PM
No, I should have. It will be in the next render.  :-[
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Post by: Dune on September 06, 2013, 02:28:00 AM
Really nice and moody.What grass are you using, by the way?
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Post by: mr-miley on September 06, 2013, 04:05:41 AM
Outstanding render, I really like the "feel" of this  :) Great work!
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Post by: Oshyan on September 06, 2013, 05:48:39 AM
Oh, I rather like this! Soft shadows would be good, yes. Only problem for me overall is it's quite dim and gloomy, like a dawn, or very hazy day. Any reason for that? Maybe something in post processing? I'd be tempted to increase exposure or sunlight strength by 2-3x, in fact; it really should be much brighter in my view. But maybe I'm imagining a different time of day than you. Either way, nicely setup and detailed scene. Very "ordinary" but very realistic.

- Oshyan
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Post by: yossam on September 06, 2013, 09:55:20 AM
Soft shadows added..................
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on September 06, 2013, 10:06:11 AM
This is nice.....dawn or dusk, I like the lighting.  Perhaps a critter getting a drink at water's edge?
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Post by: yossam on September 06, 2013, 10:33:55 AM
Thanks for the comments everyone.  ;D


Dune................there are 7 populations ( 3 varieties ). Ornamental grass V.2, Phragmites dry, and corndog grass in the water.


The lighting is supposed to be early morning, just after sunrise. I had the mist a whole lot denser in the first render, too dense actually.


Lyla..............couldn't figure out what type critter to add. I had a duck in the water at one time...................he looked lonely all by himself so I took him out. Any suggestions?
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on September 06, 2013, 10:44:53 AM
Doves (dove season here that is why I thought of them), deer, coyote?
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Post by: Dune on September 06, 2013, 12:42:43 PM
Yeah, but take care not to compromise reality with low quality models.
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Post by: TheBadger on September 06, 2013, 01:54:27 PM
Smooth