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Title: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 03, 2018, 10:02:30 PM

At least something more then a doodle.
This image is more then 90 % or so finished to my eye. But i have 2 questions.

I wanted this one to be a little dark. But is it too dark?
On one of my monitors it looks good, in the second one it might be a little dark to others. Not sure.

The wreck on the right lower side does it look Ok (finished) to you?
I might add kind of a little trail of wreck parts from the lower right to the main wreck but not sure if it needs more.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: luvsmuzik on June 03, 2018, 10:36:10 PM
No criticism here. Shards in front of the main light source would appear dark as you have them. Outstanding render!
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Dune on June 04, 2018, 01:04:01 AM
It's rather dark, but that does help the gloomy mood. And you have to see at max size to really see the wreck, as the background there is rather dark too.
The wreck itself might have some part added that looks more like whatever has been wrecked. It's 'just' a bunch of parts now. If it's a spaceship, maybe a wing or engine, or anything more recognizable.
IMO.
But I like the concept very much!
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: bobbystahr on June 04, 2018, 01:45:33 AM
Mostly good one. Displays fine on both my monitors but I agree with Dune on the wreckage which just looks like space junk and not a wrecked vessel at the moment.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 01:49:13 AM

Thanks all.
I agree about the wreck. I was already changing some parts in that aspect.
How about this one?
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 02:02:37 AM

It looked like it needed a little crop on the lower side.
So i changed the look just a little without loosing much of the view.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: DocCharly65 on June 04, 2018, 02:31:19 AM
Oh yeah, thats a convincing render of a space catastrophy/accident...
The last renders give in fact a better impression that it could have been a vessel or a station.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 02:34:19 AM

Thanks Nils.
The last one is the final probably.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Hannes on June 04, 2018, 02:36:26 AM
Super cool!!! Great image! And yes, it depends on the monitor. I have two screens as well, and on one of it it's quite dark, and the other one looks good.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 03:17:09 AM

Thanks Hannes.
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Post by: Dune on June 04, 2018, 03:53:01 AM
That's it, Kadri!
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 04:20:25 AM
Quote from: Dune on June 04, 2018, 03:53:01 AM
That's it, Kadri!

:)
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Agura Nata on June 04, 2018, 09:20:46 AM
Cool stuff Kadri!
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 09:45:39 AM

Thank you.
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Post by: bobbystahr on June 04, 2018, 01:32:36 PM
Nailed it...tells a story now; well done Kadri!
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: WAS on June 04, 2018, 01:38:39 PM
Quote from: Kadri on June 03, 2018, 10:02:30 PM

At least something more then a doodle.
This image is more then 90 % or so finished to my eye. But i have 2 questions.

I wanted this one to be a little dark. But is it too dark?
On one of my monitors it looks good, in the second one it might be a little dark to others. Not sure.

The wreck on the right lower side does it look Ok (finished) to you?
I might add kind of a little trail of wreck parts from the lower right to the main wreck but not sure if it needs more.

Looks really awesome! Love the lighting. I'm wondering if rock objects would look nicer?

As for the brightness, on my monitor and my TV, it looks great, on my phone, with locked in contrast and colour settings, it is pretty dark and little hard to see, actually.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Matt on June 04, 2018, 04:50:59 PM
It's too dark to see the wreck clearly on my iPhone (it's visible at max brightness but when I have the screen at a lower setting it's indistinguishable from the background).

Why not put it against the brighter parks of the background to create a silhouette?

Matt
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Matt on June 04, 2018, 04:54:09 PM
...or have something else in the background that extends some light into the lower right corner?
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 10:10:18 PM
Thanks all.

Quote from: WASasquatch on June 04, 2018, 01:38:39 PM
...
I'm wondering if rock objects would look nicer?
...

I tried but couldn't get them the way i want (they are scattered rock objects). The bare look looked better then what i tried.
They are a little bigger now then they should be probably.
With a smaller size they might look OK. The rock amount could be a little less too maybe.

Matt the unprocessed image was a little lighter. I liked the darker look but it is here a bit too much as it looks.

I am making some tests now to make a small animation of the scene.
I will try to change(make it brighter) the scene so much i can without loosing the look too much.
I will test morphing because of render times. But in my older tests it didn't work all the time.
Curious if it will help here. Rendering the clouds in half HD and all the other parts in HD would be easier probably.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: WAS on June 05, 2018, 02:10:26 AM
Quote from: Kadri on June 04, 2018, 10:10:18 PM
Thanks all.

Quote from: WASasquatch on June 04, 2018, 01:38:39 PM
...
I'm wondering if rock objects would look nicer?
...

I tried but couldn't get them the way i want (they are scattered rock objects). The bare look looked better then what i tried.
They are a little bigger now then they should be probably.
With a smaller size they might look OK. The rock amount could be a little less too maybe.

Matt the unprocessed image was a little lighter. I liked the darker look but it is here a bit too much as it looks.

I am making some tests now to make a small animation of the scene.
I will try to change(make it brighter) the scene so much i can without loosing the look too much.
I will test morphing because of render times. But in my older tests it didn't work all the time.
Curious if it will help here. Rendering the clouds in half HD and all the other parts in HD would be easier probably.

Looking at the later iterations against the first, it does look much better. All in all a amazing scene, though you know me, I love atmospherics TG. Lots I love about it, and lots I want to do when I have a better machine, or other things improve.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 05, 2018, 02:41:04 AM
Quote from: WASasquatch on June 05, 2018, 02:10:26 AM
... though you know me, I love atmospherics TG. Lots I love about it, and lots I want to do when I have a better machine, or other things improve.

Yes Terragen is great from that aspect.
In other forums you can hear that the render engine regarding clouds-atmosphere is always praised too.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: archonforest on June 05, 2018, 03:04:09 AM
very cool image Kadri! Well done.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 05, 2018, 06:11:43 AM

Thank you.
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Post by: inkydigit on June 05, 2018, 01:39:48 PM
Love this!
:)
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 05, 2018, 02:36:00 PM

Thanks :)
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Post by: Seth on June 05, 2018, 04:05:38 PM
really good !
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 05, 2018, 04:35:45 PM

Thank you.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Agura Nata on June 07, 2018, 03:19:18 AM
Great render dear Kadri :)
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 07, 2018, 03:30:05 AM

Thank you :)
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: masonspappy on June 07, 2018, 04:34:13 AM
I  like how the clouds are illuminated by the star.
Maybe a silhouette of a body or two mixed with the wreckage? ?   :o
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: mhaze on June 07, 2018, 04:45:08 AM
I don't usually like space renders but this one is really good.
Title: Re: Dust
Post by: Kadri on June 07, 2018, 01:11:18 PM

Thank you guys.

Quote from: masonspappy on June 07, 2018, 04:34:13 AM
...
Maybe a silhouette of a body or two mixed with the wreckage? ?   :o

That was and still is in my mind. Maybe i will add it to the animation if i can finish it.