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Title: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 28, 2009, 01:56:13 PM
this render is not finished yet but i wanted to show the first try of it ;)
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Tangled-Universe on January 28, 2009, 02:08:30 PM
Ahhh..finally you're back on track posting images :)

I like the atmosphere in this one. The idea of big rocks on the hills is good but I think they could use some more work.
Also, the bark on the trees looks a bit dull.
Clouds and lighting are fine :)

How do you like your new quaddie? :D

Martin
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 28, 2009, 02:13:50 PM
the quad core is just wiiild dude !
it works like a clockwork ;)
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Post by: rcallicotte on January 28, 2009, 06:14:14 PM
Nice, Seth.  TU hit it all on the head.
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Post by: Mohawk20 on January 28, 2009, 06:19:44 PM
I like the stones... the shapes and texture.
Water looks good as well, and the lighting is realistic.
I like it!
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Post by: moodflow on January 29, 2009, 12:14:01 AM
I like this alot.  The stones look great to me, as well as the lighting and populations. 
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Post by: Hannes on January 29, 2009, 12:36:40 AM
I like it too. Very natural lighting. The fog is perfect.
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 29, 2009, 03:45:03 AM
i won't touch the stone, i like them this way too ^^
i'll see what i can do about the bark ;)
i want just a little more light...

ah and there is no "fog"... only big fat atmo ;)
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 29, 2009, 04:11:53 AM
not finished but someplaying around...
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Post by: Mohawk20 on January 29, 2009, 05:38:43 AM
Ohhh, I really like this one, the atmo is perfect, even more realistic!
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 29, 2009, 06:04:05 AM
thank you ^^
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Post by: rcallicotte on January 29, 2009, 07:37:48 AM
Perfect, Seth.  Did you use PhotoMatix with EXR?
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 29, 2009, 07:46:00 AM
nope, i used Paint.Net
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Post by: FrankB on January 29, 2009, 08:01:52 AM
Seth, this is great!
Something else: I believe we'got used to less dynamic lighting in renders, although in reality, in photographs and with our own eyes, the parts of the terrain which are not in shadow should be even brighter. I suggest you try to lighten up these part, just as a try...

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: rcallicotte on January 29, 2009, 08:36:25 AM
@Seth - Cool!  I love Paint.NET

@Frank - Maybe I'm misunderstanding what you mean, but this looks perfectly done to me.  Not like reality exactly, but more towards a very nice photograph.  Is that what you mean, Frank?
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Post by: MacGyver on January 29, 2009, 09:37:29 AM
Great improvements! :D Did you change the POV as well?
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 29, 2009, 10:38:06 AM
like this FrankB ?
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Post by: FrankB on January 29, 2009, 11:52:39 AM
yes, very good!
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 29, 2009, 11:59:42 AM
^^
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Post by: RArcher on January 29, 2009, 05:20:19 PM
Beautiful!  Nothing here that I don't like.  Any chance you would be willing to share your atmosphere node?  I have no problem with dramatic lighting, but subtle reality seems to elude me.
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Post by: schmeerlap on January 29, 2009, 05:56:29 PM
I love the mood and lighting in this monotoned scene. Excellent work.
btw: I can't find the "Big Fat Atmosphere" button anywhere on my Atmosphere interface :-) (care to share the recipe?)

John
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on January 29, 2009, 05:59:58 PM
The way the atmosphere gets rapidly denser over distance is very appealing indeed :)
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: choronr on January 30, 2009, 01:48:18 AM
Quote from: Seth on January 28, 2009, 01:56:13 PM
this render is not finished yet but i wanted to show the first try of it ;)
I actually like your first render more than the second for its softness and lighting. When heavy fog is present, you can do away with sharpness ...great work!
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: efflux on January 30, 2009, 06:41:01 PM
Nice work. Different versions all have their own strengths. The only thing that seems not quite right to me is the general distribution of the stones. It looks like this landscape has suffered some huge upheaval to have big stones all over like that and as if there has been no erosion or deposition yet but the trees look like they have been there a long time. My opinion is that if you slope controlled some distribution of those stones it would be a dramatic improvement.
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: arisdemos on January 31, 2009, 01:27:06 AM
Good realism in the scene and lighting, but I have to agree with a previous poster about the large boulders there are just too many crowded across the foreground.  It also seeems that some of the bigger rocks have rather odd/unatural planes and angles to them.  Some additional variety of ground covering (perhaps sand?) towards part of the water area might be handy to give one relief from that very lengthy field of large rocks. This image is very good, but I belive it can get even better with further development.
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 31, 2009, 03:13:50 AM
hehehe matter of taste...
I totally disagree with the 2 above statements and I erased my distribution shaders to have boulders everywhere :)
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Post by: Hannes on January 31, 2009, 09:58:23 AM
Great mood. Outstanding athmosphere. I like both images, but I'd really love to see it WITH your distribution shader for the fake stones shader. Pleeeeeaase!!!
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 31, 2009, 12:02:13 PM
I didn' even saved the render...
I'll see what i can do next time ;)
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Post by: buzzzzz1 on January 31, 2009, 12:26:37 PM
I like the effects applied to the second one!  Only thing I would change is the Title, perhaps call it "A Rock Concert" Featuring "The Rolling Stones" I think I see Keith Richards? The old wrinkled face one near the front.  ;)  ;D  :P
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Seth on January 31, 2009, 12:38:38 PM
 ;D ;D ;D
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Post by: Mandrake on January 31, 2009, 04:29:50 PM
Think there's to much rock seth but non the less your works always fantastic!!
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Post by: Volker Harun on January 31, 2009, 04:39:22 PM
I am overwhelmed by these renders ... they are very inspiring ...
Title: Re: Wildness
Post by: Valaquent on February 02, 2009, 10:33:01 PM
That's a very beautiful piece of work!

As for the rocks looking like they have strange angles or are badly distributed, go take a look at some photos of Jasper national Park in Alberta.  This scene could have been a photo of places I have been there!