Just a practise work so I dont get too rusty over the summer :) Added a small manually made flare in postwork..
-update- new file on below
This has a ton of potential. I really like how much depth there is in the scene. If you work on it further I would suggest increasing the density of the tree populations and even adding another species or two if possible. I find the lens flare somewhat distracting when trying to view the small details in the background.
This is beautiful :)
I love the sunset.
I it a procedural or digital elevation model terrain.
Keep up the good work.
Richard
Agree with the above ... go ahead and surprise us with a masterpiece! ,-)
Looks very nice as it is in a painterly way , Freelancah :)
With a little more effort it could look very realistic too. If this is your goal of course!
The flare is much too strong. That said, I like it. The problem is that is overwhelms the composition. I would add some more brush, a different type of pine to go with the firs.
It's a very good render now. Keep going.
Agree with the above comments. Only other thing I would add is that the grass is a little large in the foreground - it makes it difficult to figure out the correct scale for the trees.
awesome sky...love the mood!
look forward to the next one.
btw what were your atmo/cloud settings?
(maybe a clip file.....)
:)
great mood - we worry too much about realism, art is about our personal experience of the world after all everyone sees the world differently!
Quote from: RArcher on September 02, 2010, 05:18:26 PM
This has a ton of potential.
indeed !!!
I hope to see more of this render ^^
Hmm.. Thanks for the suggestions. I think I'l redo this with some other plantation and change the lensflare :P Will update when I get the time...
Re rendered from different pov and hopefully better light and flare
couple weird fakestones exploded for some reason..oh well. hopefully you wont see them :P
I really like the lighting of this piece! Great! What I would do, though, is have more grass on the foreground, patchy maybe, but denser and soft, like a lush hill interspersed with (some) bare patches of soil, where some ground has subsided.
PoV and lighting really improved ... good work!
brilliant, I could watch this for hours!
Sweet!
Great lighting!
Hi
Great!
I agree with RAcher and Seth and wish more plants in the foreground.
ciao
Naoo
Very good renders, I especially like the second one. Great job!