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Title: Tropics
Post by: RArcher on September 05, 2010, 05:06:12 PM
Bit of a tropical scene here.  Some of it I like but some not so much!  The jungle is made up of 12 different species of trees so it has nice diversity which I am happy with, and the water looks great.  The beach is more difficult, while I like that it is smooth and blown out it just doesn't integrate all that well.  Took a long time to render the water so maybe unlikely that I will redo anything.
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: Seth on September 05, 2010, 05:19:54 PM
The water is really really realistic.
great light too
excellent render
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Post by: inkydigit on September 05, 2010, 05:53:15 PM
agree with Franck... excellent!
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Post by: Henry Blewer on September 05, 2010, 05:59:26 PM
The beach is not so bad. Sometimes sand will reflect light so it looses any contrast.
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: schmeerlap on September 05, 2010, 06:09:45 PM
Quote from: RArcher on September 05, 2010, 05:06:12 PM
The beach . . . . . . . . . .  just doesn't integrate all that well.

Excellent render.
Do you mean the transition from sand to jungle undergrowth. Maybe some patches of grass or some coarser grained sand may help the integration at the jungle fringe. And you'd just require a crop render to overlay your main render. But the suggested embellishments would be just that; not really necesary.

John
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: dandelO on September 05, 2010, 06:21:55 PM
I like this a lot, too. Are there shadows enabled on the water object, or something? The transition of the sub-surface visibility and its cut-off point seems very drastic and sharp. Maybe, though, my eyes are just confusing the reflectivity on the beach sand with transparency. Most likely.

Regardless, I like it very much. Nice! :)
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: Kadri on September 05, 2010, 07:53:39 PM

If you did save the render as an EXR too , you can alter the brightness and so on the EXR and then comp it on this one.
Or use whatever method you like. I save in BMP and EXR at the same time for cases like this.
Mostly no need to render ones more.

Nice image Ryan  :)
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: domdib on September 06, 2010, 09:07:47 AM
Excellent water and vegetation.
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Post by: Volker Harun on September 06, 2010, 02:42:50 PM
Agree with Schmeerlap ... though I'd rather add some dirt, scrubs and garbage for a smooth integration ...

Yep ... a cool render nonetheless
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: ra on September 07, 2010, 03:09:40 PM
I really like this render. Reminds me of the movie "Rogue" - definitely could be a shot from it.
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: RArcher on September 10, 2010, 10:41:10 PM
Thanks for all the comments and suggestions, very much appreciated.  Here is a bit of an update toning the beach brightness down a bit.
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: Kadri on September 11, 2010, 02:16:31 AM

Looks very nice  :)
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: Volker Harun on September 11, 2010, 05:52:51 AM
Much better :) Glad that you reworked it :)
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: Henry Blewer on September 11, 2010, 08:21:57 AM
A big improvement Ryan. Nice work with the sand. I like the darker area where the water effects the sand color. This is something I seem to remember to do, but somehow never do it.
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: Seth on September 13, 2010, 11:07:54 AM
yeah much better indeed !
Title: Re: Tropics
Post by: choronr on September 14, 2010, 12:04:14 AM
Very good work Ryan. You might consider upping the red sky decay. In doing this, the sand's brightness might decrease a bit.