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Title: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on September 18, 2010, 12:26:13 PM
It's been a very long time since I've posted anything here due to my summer job but alas, I am now free to Terragen once more! The inspiration behind this picture (and its name) comes from one of the key locations in J.R.R. Tolkien's Silmarillion. Tumladen was a secret valley of everlasting green surrounded on all sides by an impenetrable wall of high mountains. This is my first go at it; as always comments and suggestions are always appreciate.  :)

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Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: schmeerlap on September 18, 2010, 12:33:23 PM
Nice foothills-with-mountains-in-background scene. I like the foreground grass deployment too. Could use one or two more different tree objects to break up the regularity of the ball-shaped tree.

John
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: domdib on September 18, 2010, 05:06:26 PM
Love the background mountains - procedural?
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on September 18, 2010, 06:13:55 PM
Thank you! I'm currently working on integrating at least two more populations of trees into the scene to add some variety. Also, the background mountains are just a simple, single alpine fractal without any adjustments on my part.
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Kadri on September 18, 2010, 07:03:18 PM

Looks nice! Curious on your new variation , darthvader1  :)
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Post by: inkydigit on September 18, 2010, 07:09:59 PM
it is beautiful, especially in the foreground, the background is also good. but they seem disconnected...
good work all the same!
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Post by: nethskie on September 18, 2010, 08:38:32 PM
beautiful!
Title: Re: Tumladen - V2
Post by: Gannaingh on September 21, 2010, 03:22:59 PM
Thanks everybody! I agree that the background seems a bit detached from the closer hills; fixing that will probably come after I am able to nail down the nearby vegitation. This second version has four tree populations although one of them is barely noticable and wil probably will be removed to same some render time.

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Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: freelancah on September 21, 2010, 03:31:09 PM
Damn fine work!
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Post by: dandelO on September 21, 2010, 04:07:57 PM
Very cool, as usual. The grasses and mid-distance tree distribution look fantastic! Nice one, Darthvader! :)
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Post by: domdib on September 21, 2010, 05:08:18 PM
Even better - now there's more sense of depth as the trees are not quite so densely packed. The grass in the foreground is already good, but I think it might be improved by a bit more variation in shade, perhaps some deeper, more saturated greens. Excellent work!
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Post by: nethskie on September 21, 2010, 06:41:03 PM
amazing update it looks real! i love the trees! (but i don't have those) :D
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on September 21, 2010, 07:12:04 PM
Thanks everybody  :)
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Jack on September 21, 2010, 07:47:17 PM
those mountains look very new zealandy hehe great job man as others have said the grass is great! very natural in colour ;D
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: sjefen on September 21, 2010, 11:18:21 PM
I really like this one.

Personally.... I would make the haze a little less dense so we
could see those beautifully background mountains a little better.

Regards,
Terje
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Dune on September 22, 2010, 03:57:14 AM
Awesome, and quoting from an ancient ad: 'Just the right combination of kiwi and the apple I suppose'. Great work and very pleasant to look at!
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on September 22, 2010, 05:22:42 PM
Shucks everybody  :)
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Post by: Hetzen on September 22, 2010, 05:34:50 PM
Wow, I missed this. Gorgeous populations. Pretty much perfect.
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Henry Blewer on September 22, 2010, 09:17:22 PM
Nice work. I have been thinking about doing an image of Narogothond. But it's been years since I read any Tolkien... It might be a good project for you if you like.
Title: Re: Tumladen - V3
Post by: Gannaingh on September 23, 2010, 05:28:58 PM
New one! The populatons are just about finalized (except for the midground bushes; I don't like those at the moment) so now I need to work on spicing up the sky a tad.

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Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: domdib on September 23, 2010, 06:17:42 PM
Gorgeous!
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Post by: Kadri on September 23, 2010, 07:39:26 PM

Sweet  :)
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: sjefen on September 23, 2010, 10:24:09 PM
It's been a while since I've used Terragen, but this makes me
wanna fire it up again ;)

Really..... it's a gorgeous picture.

Regards,
Terje
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Dune on September 24, 2010, 02:33:34 AM
Absolutely stunning, almost like paradise. Set me up a little cottage there, please.
There's one thing that bothers me; the (almost artificial looking) hooked snow line upper left. Hard to get rid of maybe? And wouldn't there be a little more herbs, low shrub and flowers in the grass? Natural grass is often more 'disturbed'. Although it would lessen the parklike, Tumladen atmosphere. Just a thought, mind you.
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Volker Harun on September 24, 2010, 03:55:16 AM
It is getting better and better ... though I was not thinking, that the first one could have been improved very much ...

Good, good, good!
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on September 26, 2010, 07:21:58 PM
Thank you everybody! This project, while not all that technically challenging, has been a lot of fun to work on. The only challenge left is to create a system of clouds that complement the mountains instead of overpowering them. I think I may have it figured out but will have to wait for some crop renders to get done before I make the final render. Thanks for all your comments!
Title: Re: **Tumladen - Final**
Post by: Gannaingh on September 29, 2010, 01:50:02 AM
This is the final render for this one, at least until my new computer shows up ;D I've worked on the mountains some, creating a thicker feel to the snow, as well as adding some flowers and bushes in the near foreground. It's been a fun project and I hope you enjoy the results :)

http://gannaingh32.deviantart.com/#/d2zpfg3
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Dune on September 29, 2010, 03:19:18 AM
FANTASTIC!

Did you use Dandel0's procedural grass, or grass objects + population variation?
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: sjefen on September 29, 2010, 03:47:23 AM
One of the best Terragen 2 images I've seen for a while.

You must render this out in a bigger size when you get your new computer.

Regards,
Terje
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on September 29, 2010, 12:12:47 PM
Thanks guys! The grass in the very near foreground is a single population but doesn't have any population variation, I just got lucky with the shadows from the trees casting some nice shadows. I didn't use Dandel0's procedural grass, but I did use his fake stone forest in the far background ;) In the mid-ground the grass is a simple surface layer with a trio of power fractal child layers to provide color variation. This layer has intersect underlying enabled which really helps to smooth out the underlying terrain. ON top of this is another surface layer with a color adjust node as the child layer to add even more color variation to the mix.
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: freelancah on September 29, 2010, 02:54:26 PM
Makes a nice background. Added it to favourites in DA. It's very LOTR'ish!
Title: Re: Tumladen - WIP
Post by: Dune on September 30, 2010, 02:44:42 AM
Thanks for your explanation, darthvader1. It's in my folder of favorites.