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Title: Nightly garden update
Post by: Mahnmut on October 17, 2010, 09:53:11 PM
This was supposed to become the normal daylight version in a normal day/magical night pair,
but I got the same error again after reconstructing it once:
Parse error at line 566:not well formed (invalid token)
the file doesn´t open in any recocnizable form.
The line in question is where the tree-object starts.
I had that problem before with the cloud-tree, is it possible that it has something to do with the treemodel?
Maybe I should post this in the TG discussion forum.
Here is the first (postable) wip image anyway:

(http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4083/5091921056_af92d3d0fa_b.jpg)

C&C are welcome as always,
Best Regards, Jan

Oh: clouds are by Matt, Altocumulus on page 8 of the cloud library,
grass is by mr Lamppost.
Title: Re: garden wip
Post by: Henry Blewer on October 18, 2010, 08:05:42 AM
I would add some of Walli's dry grass (available at NWDA) for variation. I don't know what would cause the parsing error. Have you tried to use a different tree model?
Title: Re: garden wip
Post by: Mahnmut on October 18, 2010, 09:19:31 AM
I will have a look for the dry gras, i tried to make it dry in spots using a PF on the colour function, but this didn´t come out.
The file doesn´t even open intact enough that i could change the treemodel.
I´ll try to change it in a text-editor.
Thanks,
Jan

Ok, it seems the model was to deep in subfolders (5) moved it two up and everything is fine.
I´ll be back when this wip is getting better (hopefully)
Title: Re: garden wip
Post by: Mahnmut on October 18, 2010, 11:51:53 PM
Does anyone know the childrens book "Grimbolds other world" by Nicholas Stuart Gray?
When I first read it as a child, I tried to paint the nightworld he describes and was disapointed.
Day
(http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5095242081_3579b44a15_b.jpg)

I planned to try it with TG for some time, and here is a first humble approach wich is mainly done in Photoshop, using two renders.
Night
(http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4144/5095840552_f59640c326_b.jpg)

What do you think?
Title: Re: Nightly garden update
Post by: domdib on October 19, 2010, 04:30:07 AM
Nice atmosphere on the night shot. How are you distributing the moss on the tree? It's well done.
Title: Re: Nightly garden update
Post by: Henry Blewer on October 19, 2010, 08:03:37 AM
The night scene has a really nice 'illustrated' look. I like it.
Title: Re: Nightly garden update
Post by: Mahnmut on October 20, 2010, 04:14:50 PM
Thanks.
to be honest, I don´t know what you mean by moss, there is only one imagemap for colour and displacement of the bark, and it is totally of scale, but I like the effect..
The soft shadows are greenish because I used green envirolight, maybe its the shadow of some leaves you are talking about?
Anyway, glad you like it.
Best Regards,
Jan
Title: Re: Nightly garden update
Post by: choronr on October 20, 2010, 04:33:31 PM
I like the daytime version very much; and, would be tempted to increase the decay in the atmosphere somewhat.
Title: Re: Nightly garden update
Post by: Mahnmut on October 23, 2010, 08:34:16 AM
Thanks Choronr,
Don´t know when I will have the patience to render this one again.
By decay do you mean redsky decay ore haze?

Best Regards,
Jan
Title: Re: Nightly garden update
Post by: choronr on October 23, 2010, 01:14:56 PM
Quote from: Mahnmut on October 23, 2010, 08:34:16 AM
Thanks Choronr,
Don´t know when I will have the patience to render this one again.
By decay do you mean redsky decay ore haze?

Best Regards,
Jan
The Red Sky decay should improve the image a bit.