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Title: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: masonspappy on February 18, 2011, 09:42:38 PM
Any crits and comments are welcome.  I'm working through a series of images and striving for photorealism.
Title: Re: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: otakar on February 18, 2011, 10:17:19 PM
High quality, indeed. A few crits would be the spacing of the trees (too close) and the regularity of the ground layer (some clear soil spots, perhaps?).
Title: Re: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: Dune on February 19, 2011, 03:18:16 AM
The first thing I'd do is put on soft shadows, and perhaps a little fill light from NW (relatively). The light is a bit harsh. And will they be sitting there in this leafless season?
Title: Re: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: Redwolf on February 19, 2011, 04:07:47 AM
i think the trees are well mature and could be doubled in size as with the furniture scale, and yes deffo need soft shadows, and add a few grass clumps
Title: Re: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: inkydigit on February 19, 2011, 07:34:42 AM
looks good, agree with what has already been mentione, i.e. soft shadows etc...
cheers
Jason
Title: Re: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: masonspappy on February 19, 2011, 07:04:29 PM
All,
Thanks for the feedback.  Every suggestion is good, but the one that stood out was using soft shadows. When I applied that, that photo-realistic aspect jumped appreciably!!   Thanks everyone!
- Cam
"masonspappy"




Quote from: inkydigit on February 19, 2011, 07:34:42 AM
looks good, agree with what has already been mentione, i.e. soft shadows etc...
cheers
Jason
Title: Re: Dinner For Two - Afternoon
Post by: pfrancke on February 20, 2011, 01:58:23 PM
really cool - I especially like the stove object.