Hi there,
here is my latest render. C&C welcome.
(http://reusch-axel.de/gallery/thumb_big_stonearmy1280.jpg) (http://reusch-axel.de/gallery/stonearmy1280.jpg)
The contrast between the top atmosphere and the landscape may be too large. I would be tempted to try using more haze. The rocks look very much like corals, metamorphosed into granite. Maybe some more plants sharing the same distribution...
It's a good render. Keep working on it.
Certainly seems too contrasty, the rocks are certainly extremely jagged.. Any chance of putting a puddle of water or something to draw the eye around the image?
I do like it, it just seams like its a tad barren. its better than anything I could do 10fold.
I actually like the desolate mood in this image. Sky and Atmo are great, ground color are dark but well chosen.
Once reviewing the ground a little cloer, I think the stone bed doesn't look convincing. Looks like somebody has emptied a load of stnes onto a concrete ground, but not enough to actually cover it, you know what I mean?
Anyway, to me it's a pleasant picture in an artistic sense.
Cheers,
Frank
Hi there,
here is an updated version:
(http://reusch-axel.de/gallery/thumb_big_stonearmyv21280.jpg) (http://reusch-axel.de/gallery/stonearmyv21280.jpg)
C&C welcome :D
Looks subtler. I'd even mask out some of those stones mid left to break up the 'almost' regularity. And a few dry bushes would work here too.
The atmosphere colour looks warmer too. And I've just noticed your bird object. I like having to look for detail.
The second version looks lovely. Good looking scene, congrats!
I would reccomend to place some more grass or dry grass, placed ramdomly about .