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Title: First attempt
Post by: FlyLaika on June 29, 2011, 03:33:17 PM
My first render. Just started playing with T2. Took 5 evenings:) Critiques are welcome.
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: inkydigit on June 29, 2011, 03:36:30 PM
welcome Moon_Lizard!
great start!
look forward to seeing more!
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: Henry Blewer on June 29, 2011, 03:38:12 PM
This is a good start. 8) I like the curved contrail in the sky.
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: FlyLaika on June 29, 2011, 05:37:15 PM
Thank you!
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: ascard on June 29, 2011, 08:20:11 PM
Wow  :o thats soooooooooooo waaaaaaaay much better of what i've done!! Hehehe still figuring out how to a scene like this one, a beach kinda scene. Good work!
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: ajcgi on July 12, 2011, 12:15:10 PM
Yeah excellent first render. Good balance of sand and rocks. Really like the 3 rocks piled on the right.
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: Mahnmut on July 12, 2011, 07:10:56 PM
Good balance of rocks -so to say ;)
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: TheBadger on July 12, 2011, 07:25:26 PM
Real good FlyLaika!

The only thing I don't like is the (seemingly) un-natural shapes of the rocks on the right side. I do like how you placed them though.
I would love to see an animation where the camera stays put, but the boat moves across the water and perhaps there could be some movement of the clouds.

I can almost hear the soft breeze and the sound of birds off camera now.
Title: Re: First attempt
Post by: Draigr on July 13, 2011, 03:47:49 AM
That's a very impressive first job. Way better then anything I'm doing!

Seriously, keep it up.

Also, add complexity to the terrain, it's still looking fairly plain and you can tell it's a rendering still.