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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: swissAdA on October 10, 2011, 11:53:31 AM

Title: flying UFO, fly
Post by: swissAdA on October 10, 2011, 11:53:31 AM
a new render is finish.

(http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/283/e/6/flying_ufo__fly_by_swissada-d4ceo00.jpg)


Orginal: http://swissada.deviantart.com/#/d4ceo00 (http://swissada.deviantart.com/#/d4ceo00)

I hope you like it.

C&C Welcome
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: bla bla 2 on October 10, 2011, 02:54:03 PM
Woa,  :D ça rend bien.
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: Kadri on October 10, 2011, 09:18:11 PM

Lovely :)

I have a little range-scale problem with the UFO but that is me probably.
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: Pentagular Dark on October 11, 2011, 12:40:56 AM
Quote from: Kadri on October 10, 2011, 09:18:11 PM
[...]I have a little range-scale problem with the UFO but that is me probably.
Well judging by the tree reflection on the UFO, I would say the UFO is in the foreground, and fairly small.
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: Dune on October 11, 2011, 03:50:53 AM
I'd say it's a two-seater. I really like the render, very nice lighting and detail, very smooth. Great background, absolutely astonishing. But there are two things that I would have done differently; the path is too obtrusive and too straight, IMHO. Maybe a bit too light as well. The edges could have some smaller and spread tufts of grass and perhaps some mosses. I think you didn't angle the original grass object. A few degrees would take out the 'straightness' of the grass. 
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: FrankB on October 11, 2011, 04:40:23 AM
I like this one. I have to agree that the background is astonishingly real. Very good job on this one.
Not so keen on the foreground, though. Actually in itself it isn't bad, but compared to the awesome background it's too CG.

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: ra on October 13, 2011, 04:23:32 PM
Hehe, this is cool  ;D
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: :) on October 14, 2011, 11:14:09 PM
background is too hazy for such clear day
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: RichTwo on October 15, 2011, 10:21:25 PM
The sci-fi geek in me says to make the UFO about a thousand times larger and hovering over the mountain - then slagging the top of it off with  some kind of green light beam.  But nice composition!
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: Jonathan on October 19, 2011, 12:30:13 PM
Nice render - I agree that the haze is a bit too strong...and by the way, where did you find the ferns? :)
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: swissAdA on October 19, 2011, 02:17:26 PM
Quote from: Jonathan on October 19, 2011, 12:30:13 PM
where did you find the ferns? :)

the ferns is form the user "Klas"

http://www.terralights.de/terralightsII/Downloads/details/id=19.html (http://www.terralights.de/terralightsII/Downloads/details/id=19.html)
Title: Re: flying UFO, fly
Post by: Jonathan on October 19, 2011, 03:58:41 PM
Thanks for the info :) As Deep Purple sang, Keep Space Truckin' !