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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: yossam on October 10, 2011, 11:27:04 PM

Title: TheDayB4
Post by: yossam on October 10, 2011, 11:27:04 PM
Trying some different plants for a change. C&C welcome...........
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: Pentagular Dark on October 11, 2011, 12:36:07 AM
The plants look a little fake mainly because of the lack other trees around them.
Other than that it's a nice render I like the Dino and algae.  ;)
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: Dune on October 11, 2011, 03:43:53 AM
I agree with Cat; you need more species of trees and plants, and angle the original object 3 degrees or so. I don't like the sky. Why not start out with a plain sky until you got the scene ok? The dino's head is half hidden, better move it a bit. But it has potential!

Ah, I now see the dino's head isn't hidden, but kind of 'eats' the leaves behind it. Still needs to be moved slightly.
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: Pentagular Dark on October 11, 2011, 06:08:43 PM
Also upon closer inspection I realized there are no waves on the water, at all. Anywhere. Doesn't seem realistic either.
BTW call me Parker.
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: :) on October 11, 2011, 08:33:31 PM
Is good as it is, looks very good. leave it as is, not make changes.
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: Dune on October 12, 2011, 04:16:51 AM
OK, Parker. You're right, a few ripples would do well. Try the wind patch option on some small scales.
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: yossam on October 12, 2011, 11:20:41 AM
Made some changes......
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: Henry Blewer on October 12, 2011, 12:35:37 PM
The sun may be too low to the horizon. I think you may get more variation with your lighting if the sun angle was higher.
Title: Re: TheDayB4
Post by: Dune on October 13, 2011, 02:59:44 AM
Henry is right. It's probably also due to high atmo density (?).  And perhaps move your POV so that the line of 'coast' isn't so straight. Or warp the coast a little more.