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Title: Chill
Post by: choronr on December 15, 2011, 08:43:04 PM
The 'Chill' image is a culmination of most all of the elements contained in my last image 'Autumn Reflections' ( http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=13597.0 )  except that it is a winter scene that used the following additions:

•   Overcast sky/clouds by FrankB available at the Planetside forum.

•   Big Pine model by jcinbama which is available at Ashundar downloads.

•   Ice flows - Thanks to both dandelO and Dune for their files which were used here to create the broken ice in the water. These can be downloaded at the Planetside forum.

•   Fog - Thanks to Mark (Thelby).  From time to time, he and I trade ideas and files. Initially, I had worked on the fog, localizing a cloud formation with set coordinates. After repeatedly re-seeding the clouds numerous times looking to achieve the results I was looking for, I gave up for a day. Mark had heard from me regarding the issue and sent over a file which after viewing was a perfect fit. He used a method I have used in the past which I should have thought of in the first place.

•   Refer to other elements mentioned in the  Autumn Reflections thread.

Enjoy.
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: FrankB on December 16, 2011, 02:36:00 AM
Great image, Bob! The fog looks amazing, the light too. Not so keen on the ice in the river (too apparently voronoi), but overall, very well done :)
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: Dune on December 16, 2011, 02:39:47 AM
Wow, was my first thought. Very nice atmosphere and great wisps of mist indeed.

When I look closer, I would make some changes. The grass is very light, almost illuminated, toning it down to a more dead color would do it good. I would flatten the ice more, or if it's a lake with ice chunks, I would make a less even distribution, perhaps more near the edges. But I think it would look good with quite flat ice, some irregular white 'less transparent' ice, and CRACKS. Maybe a few chunks of ice raised above the average sheet. Or make it all ice except for a warped voronoi hole in the middle.

That is; if you need my opinion...
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: inkydigit on December 16, 2011, 08:03:35 AM
this is stunning Bob, and I agree with Frank and Ulco; with only some small changes to the ice and the vegetation in the foreground, this will be amazing!
can't wait to see the next version!
cheers
J
:)
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: airflamesred on December 16, 2011, 08:06:25 AM
Oooh yes, nice. I would add another mountain just left of centre, in the background.
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: choronr on December 16, 2011, 05:33:50 PM
Quote from: FrankB on December 16, 2011, 02:36:00 AM
Great image, Bob! The fog looks amazing, the light too. Not so keen on the ice in the river (too apparently voronoi), but overall, very well done :)
Thanks Frank, maybe reducing ice coverage will work ...we'll see.
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: choronr on December 16, 2011, 05:37:13 PM
Quote from: Dune on December 16, 2011, 02:39:47 AM
Wow, was my first thought. Very nice atmosphere and great wisps of mist indeed.

When I look closer, I would make some changes. The grass is very light, almost illuminated, toning it down to a more dead color would do it good. I would flatten the ice more, or if it's a lake with ice chunks, I would make a less even distribution, perhaps more near the edges. But I think it would look good with quite flat ice, some irregular white 'less transparent' ice, and CRACKS. Maybe a few chunks of ice raised above the average sheet. Or make it all ice except for a warped voronoi hole in the middle.

That is; if you need my opinion...
Thanks Ulco; agree about the grass. Had brown/gray grass in the previous iteration - should have kept it. Many possibilities with the water/ice. Will play and see.
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: choronr on December 16, 2011, 05:39:55 PM
Quote from: inkydigit on December 16, 2011, 08:03:35 AM
this is stunning Bob, and I agree with Frank and Ulco; with only some small changes to the ice and the vegetation in the foreground, this will be amazing!
can't wait to see the next version!
cheers
J
:)
Thanks Jason. Will play a little more and maybe do just a quick render ...we'll see.
Title: Re: Chill
Post by: choronr on December 16, 2011, 05:41:17 PM
Quote from: airflamesred on December 16, 2011, 08:06:25 AM
Oooh yes, nice. I would add another mountain just left of centre, in the background.
Thank you. Just a little more experimenting here; then, on to something else.