C&C please...............this needs something :-\
Maybe smooth out the water and add a bit of color to the stream bank. It actually looks quite nice!
Nice.
Maybe it needs some focus,
something on the water, either in the foreground or near the horizon.
And I´d second masonspappys opinion about the smoothing of the water, just a bit.
Best regards,
J
I like this one Yossam.
Worth developing I'd say.
I quite like it! Especially the riverbanks are well done. I'm not too sure about the trees, though. They look a bit lopsided. And you could add some, especially towards the background.
You might reduce the reflectivity of the water (or perhaps it's because the sun is relatively strong here), increase the translucency and add a few stones in the riverbed.
Just a few ideas, not more. So far it looks good (in my humble eyes...)
Been tinkering...............
Looks ducked up to me.....
Instead of FUBAR it is DUBAR.
Well, even with the fowl foursome it's still a great image!
I have it rendering again without the feathered addition. I just have to do stupid images sometimes to break the boredom. I really think I take life too seriously sometimes, too much going on in the world right now. Doom and gloom................
Love the definition of the rays in the latest one. And the little irreverent touch with the ducks is A-OK with me. :D
- Oshyan
I like it with the ducks too. Without them its a landscape study. But with them its a finished work.