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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: yossam on January 02, 2013, 01:21:10 AM

Title: Lean
Post by: yossam on January 02, 2013, 01:21:10 AM
C&C please.........
Title: Re: Lean
Post by: Dune on January 02, 2013, 03:07:26 AM
You're very productive. I like the subtle bird, but I would make it twice it's size, so it doesn't appear as a dust particle at first glance (that's what I thought). And I also like the drama in the landscape, terrific terrain! I think you could enhance that drama more by more dramatic lighting, darker clouds, illuminating certain parts, darkening others.
Title: Re: Lean
Post by: yossam on January 02, 2013, 04:58:34 PM
Changed the clouds and lighting.
Title: Re: Lean
Post by: Dune on January 03, 2013, 03:50:33 AM
I took the liberty to adjust it a little more. Dark clouds in the distance (where the blue is) would even dramatize it more, I guess.
Title: Re: Lean
Post by: yossam on January 04, 2013, 03:21:36 PM
One more time...........
Title: Re: Lean
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on January 04, 2013, 04:08:34 PM
those clouds in the last render look kinda ominous, bad storm.

nice displacements
Title: Re: Lean
Post by: Dune on January 05, 2013, 04:25:14 AM
Nice and ominous indeed, changed gamma again.