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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: ADE on July 07, 2013, 05:10:34 AM

Title: Old Cottage
Post by: ADE on July 07, 2013, 05:10:34 AM
All models by me...C/C welcome
Title: Re: Old Cottage
Post by: Hannes on July 07, 2013, 06:20:20 AM
These are quite nice models.
The lighting makes the image look a bit flat. The sun is almost behind the camera I assume. If you'd put it a bit more to the side you'd get more depth.
Title: Re: Old Cottage
Post by: TheBadger on July 07, 2013, 06:42:50 PM
I like the details and composition and subject. My only crit is that it seems really flat. Although it is even across the image. So that is good.
The part I like best is the little doorway onto the forest we get on the left side. THis adds a sense of a much bigger world surrounding the primary subject. A good story could go along with this.

Title: Re: Old Cottage
Post by: ADE on July 11, 2013, 03:46:20 PM
another POX of the same set up....
Title: Re: Old Cottage
Post by: ADE on July 11, 2013, 03:47:06 PM
ooopssss POV
Title: Re: Old Cottage
Post by: TheBadger on July 11, 2013, 03:49:20 PM
The light feels much more dynamic here. I like it.
Title: Re: Old Cottage
Post by: Dune on July 12, 2013, 02:32:27 AM
I like it. But you should add a little fill light on the left of the house, and use some bump on the stones!