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Title: spiderWaspTower
Post by: pfrancke on July 24, 2013, 08:19:29 PM
four xenodream fractals - now hopefully I'm off to see if I can make vector displacements work!
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Post by: Oshyan on July 24, 2013, 08:22:04 PM
Veeery cool. I love the shapes, but the atmosphere and clouds around it are really what make this.

- Oshyan
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Post by: TheBadger on July 25, 2013, 10:15:45 AM
I agree with Oshyan.

Would only add the observation that the form on the left is negatively affecting this composition on balance.
If I was a photographer standing in that spot, I would move to get it out of my shot.

Very cool anyway.
Title: Re: spiderWaspTower
Post by: pfrancke on July 25, 2013, 11:31:51 AM
thank you guys -- yes I agree that it is a failure from a composition point of view.   Way too heavy on the left.  My fill lighting and such came in from the wrong direction, my original goal (failed) was to be looking at the view from within shadows on a narrow strip of beach and the interesting cliff thing to the left.  It might have worked better if it were taller and darker, but anyway, I know what you mean.
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Post by: rcallicotte on July 25, 2013, 12:33:36 PM
Brilliant!  Very nice atmosphere and rendering, too.
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Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on July 25, 2013, 05:09:56 PM
pfrancke - this is awesome.  :D

looks wild, i really like the structures, and the clouds/atmosphere goes well with the rest of the rendering.
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Post by: inkydigit on July 25, 2013, 05:11:51 PM
excellent stuff!
a postcard from a galaxy far, far away!
:)
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Post by: ADE on July 26, 2013, 10:18:09 AM
great render again P