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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: mindsap on August 19, 2013, 12:40:41 AM

Title: Farm WIP
Post by: mindsap on August 19, 2013, 12:40:41 AM
WIP I don't think I like the composition.  and glare from silo. 
Title: Re: Farm WIP
Post by: Dune on August 19, 2013, 02:36:47 AM
It's a good start at least.
PRO: composition.
CON: the big tree, I would change that to a better quality of push it backward a little, more grasses and maybe flowers at the edge of the field, maybe denser wheat. I would also increase the contrast (less glow in sky perhaps) plus add a no shadow fill light at the right so that the silo for instance gets a little reflection on the right side as well from bounced light. Makes it rounder.
Title: Re: Farm WIP
Post by: mhaze on August 19, 2013, 04:18:02 AM
Ditto Dune's comments - maybe move the tractor, it's all a little busy in the centre.
Title: Re: Farm WIP
Post by: EoinArmstrong on August 19, 2013, 04:20:37 AM
I agree with Dune... the atmo and lighting are lovely
Title: Re: Farm WIP
Post by: alessandro on August 19, 2013, 04:50:59 AM
Nice WIP, can't wait to see the final result.
Title: Re: Farm WIP
Post by: TheBadger on August 19, 2013, 06:29:17 AM
It looks like a cartoon. I think it looks very good this way. But if you want a photo, then I agree with whats already been said.