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Title: "Remember When"
Post by: masonspappy on September 02, 2013, 01:09:47 AM
This is my attempt to copy an image by Stefan Haberkorn displayed  in a Cinema 4D forum.  I've been playing around with some ideas for trees and vegetation (never been particularly happy with xFrog trees for close up work, although they are fine for distance). Not sure if I'm done at this point or should add more to it, so I'll park it here for a few days and see what kind of feedback I get.
- Cam
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: yossam on September 02, 2013, 01:18:04 AM
I like............the only thing that I would do is either make your flower population shorter, or add another population of grass maybe to accompany the flowers.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Dune on September 02, 2013, 03:19:01 AM
Nice work so far. What I would do is get lots more grass and flowers in to cover the bare ground. And I also think this could be a very nice setup for a moody image, with mist and some strange light here and there, really mysterious. The trees are very nice, but some of the branches just have leaves on them, and these look a bit 'simple', and that's too bad. Maybe you can obscure those branches with other foliage.
I agree; let it sit for a while and see what ideas come up.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: inkydigit on September 02, 2013, 05:24:40 PM
A great scene and cool idea Cam.... more grasses and tree variations, as stated already, would help take this to the next level... I love the tree house and swing etc!
:)
Jason
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Jo Kariboo on September 02, 2013, 07:43:30 PM
Great achievement !!!
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Lady of the Lake on September 02, 2013, 08:53:30 PM
A great idea for an image.  Keep it going.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: jo on September 02, 2013, 10:01:03 PM
Hi Cam,

I think if you added some translucence to the leaves they'd look a lot better.

Regards,

Jo
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: masonspappy on September 03, 2013, 03:42:20 AM
Thanks all for the suggestions.  I've come up with two other versions of this image based on your input.  Here's the first and I'll post the 2nd in a day or so.
- Cam
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Lady of the Lake on September 03, 2013, 10:29:02 AM
An eerie yellowish glow (light) in the tree house perhaps?  This is getting very spooky already.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Dune on September 03, 2013, 11:08:37 AM
Yeah! That's what I mean. Perhaps some small lights out there in the mist, like fairies walking around, or zombies, or just scouts with torches finding the missing child (who is of course long gone and aged and now lives down under under a different name).
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: TheBadger on September 04, 2013, 12:42:25 AM
Its good. THe last one is creepy though. Looks like a horror movie.  :o
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: masonspappy on September 04, 2013, 02:15:47 AM
@ Dune:  OVer here, "down under" usually means someplace in South Carolina... ;D
@Badger: And it's looking even creepier....
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: DannyG on September 04, 2013, 02:45:12 PM
bottom lite does make it spooky, cool stuff mason
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: masonspappy on September 07, 2013, 02:14:02 PM
I was not satisfied with the firefly  results using the TG3 lighting system so I postworked them in with PSP. (I think the mist was distorting the light pinpoints so that they were always too large.) But I did kind of like the effect when a single light point was enlarged and brightened so I left it in.
There is one more version of this I'm working on - early morning with mist. Hope to post shortly.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Lady of the Lake on September 07, 2013, 02:17:58 PM
This is really cool.
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Post by: choronr on September 07, 2013, 03:51:07 PM
The drama is building ...you've got a goodie going here.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: Kadri on September 07, 2013, 08:46:17 PM

I like the last one.
I wish you could use a more detailed Tree object.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: masonspappy on September 08, 2013, 09:00:17 AM
Quote from: Kadri on September 07, 2013, 08:46:17 PM
I wish you could use a more detailed Tree object.

Would if I could.  This is a very highly customized xFrog tree. It was re-scaled to accommodate the bark I created for this shot. Also played with the geometry (including adding a side trunk)  and branch distribution factors.  I think I'm a few steps closer to my goal of a realistic tree but there is more work to be done.  BTW, I don't want to give the impression I'm criticizing xFrog. Their stuff is still fine for distance work. It's just that I have a very specific need for objects that hold their realism when examined up close.
Title: Re: "Remember When"
Post by: masonspappy on September 08, 2013, 09:39:29 AM
The second variation of the original image.  I'm not sure if this is normal performance, but adding GodRays increased the render time to about 11 hours(!) :o