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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: fleetwood on October 15, 2013, 11:26:40 AM

Title: Jasper Springs
Post by: fleetwood on October 15, 2013, 11:26:40 AM
The first touches of Fall.

Trees -  Marc Gebhart, Xfrog
Grass, Prairie Rose - Walli
Heather - Ulco
Title: Re: Jasper Springs
Post by: Jo Kariboo on October 15, 2013, 12:29:45 PM
I like it !!! Maybe change the POV to have a catch eye.  :)
Title: Re: Jasper Springs
Post by: fleetwood on October 15, 2013, 03:15:17 PM
Probably it would benefit from a well placed boat or moose.

Originally I had a house by the spring but it looked kind of
overpowering to me. I added a small mesh displacment which makes it look a bit like the crooked house that belonged to
the crooked man with the crooked dog and the crooked cat.

The medieval house model is by baychaser.
Title: Re: Jasper Springs
Post by: choronr on October 15, 2013, 04:15:37 PM
A really nice point of view and composition. You might consider having the sky less saturated.
Title: Re: Jasper Springs
Post by: cyphyr on October 15, 2013, 04:22:21 PM
I love the saturation of the sky and reflection. I was like that here today.
I'd avoid the moose! I've yet to see a mammal imported into TG that worked (I think someone did a woolly-mammoth a while ago ~ that worked).
The boat would be cool.

Maybe a few more layers of grass to loose the evenness of its distribution.
Maybe soft shadows just a tad.

Good work

Richard
Title: Re: Jasper Springs
Post by: Jo Kariboo on October 16, 2013, 09:47:35 PM
The last one is better !!!
Title: Re: Jasper Springs
Post by: TheBadger on October 16, 2013, 10:47:09 PM
My only complaint is that the trees are in nice columns. There seems to be little variation in the placement of the trees.