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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: yossam on October 24, 2013, 11:32:56 PM

Title: Stream
Post by: yossam on October 24, 2013, 11:32:56 PM
May have to do some more work on the rocks..................
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Post by: kaedorg on October 25, 2013, 12:27:54 AM
i do agree with you on rocks, maybe some colour variatons on trees too

Otherwise i like the scenery
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Post by: yossam on October 25, 2013, 10:07:11 AM
Made some changes.................
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on October 25, 2013, 11:54:41 AM
I like everything but the rocks.....I think it is the color of them.
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Post by: kaedorg on October 25, 2013, 11:55:56 AM
Agree, i prefer the second view but rock colours could be more subtle
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Post by: yossam on October 25, 2013, 12:07:57 PM
What color would you prefer?
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Post by: kaedorg on October 25, 2013, 12:13:08 PM
i like the grey and white, and i would keep the orange but i would reduce it for just subtle touches here and there
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Post by: Gannaingh on October 25, 2013, 02:21:40 PM
I agree about going back to the grey color for the rocks. The water is also a bit choppy for my tastes, but that's probably because I have a major soft spot for smooth reflections. I love the vegetation and the atmosphere. Nice work.
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Post by: choronr on October 25, 2013, 02:35:31 PM
I agree, nice work. However, there is an overall sharpness to the image that needs to be softened. Also, maybe the orange color on the rocks needs to be darkened; and, adding a bit more 'blue' to it.
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Post by: yossam on October 25, 2013, 03:42:34 PM
More changes............toned the color of the rocks down. calmed the water a little, and changed the position of the sun just a hair.
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on October 25, 2013, 04:12:32 PM
I think this is much better.   :)
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Post by: choronr on October 25, 2013, 04:35:00 PM
Now you've nailed it. Very good.
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Post by: archonforest on October 25, 2013, 06:54:23 PM
Nice one :)
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Post by: kaedorg on October 25, 2013, 11:46:06 PM
Last one is very nice. Great job
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Post by: Jo Kariboo on October 26, 2013, 01:01:53 AM
The last one are better for the colors of rocks but  I think the water could be further improved.
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Post by: yossam on October 26, 2013, 02:04:04 AM
Suggestions for the water.................?  :-[
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Post by: choronr on October 26, 2013, 02:19:14 AM
Two things. First, consider moving the sun at a position and altitude closer the right/center such that it would be partially into the cloud but exposed. And, at a lower altitude. Now, you'll put more light on the water. This shouldn't affect you nice rocks.

Next, lower the waves (minimal) and increase roughness. Do what you can to effect 'wind patches'.